To My Soulmate Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

To My Soulmate

Rating: 4.9


O, the shining star of my night
Thou breakest my lonliness
With thy caressing light,
When I bemuse here in darkness.
The distance can ne'er separate us
Tho' we've in life less delights,
But the eternal bridge of light-
Of intimacy, we take flight
To a silent land of peace and love;
Reside in our mind from all above
Where we'll be twined evermore
By one soul and mind for ever.

Thursday, July 26, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: soul mate
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The one who really knows it here! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sajini G 30 July 2012

Really expressing the mentality of a soul mate.

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Valerie Dohren 31 July 2012

Lovely write, great expression of thought.

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Sandra J. 31 July 2012

Beautifully written :)

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Meena Mustafa 02 August 2012

Lovely :) great thoughts outpouring here... enjoyed reading it. tyvm

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 03 August 2012

an interesting piece of work and it is too interesting to read when someone talks about the soul mate! VP, all your poems are very imaginative.. Good!

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Marieta Maglas 20 November 2012

beautiful poem-I enjoyed reading it-thank you for sharing!

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Miss Darkness 17 November 2012

Loved the last 4 lines... Nice writing :)

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Hans Vr 23 September 2012

Beautiful poem, my friend. Soul mate. Great if we can get a real soul mate.

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Indranil Bhaduri 21 September 2012

A beautiful write..deeply touched..

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Neela Nath Das 01 September 2012

A touch of metaphysical poet I find here in this poem.To think two souls entwined is the divinity of thought. Loved it. Vipins a great job! 10+++

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