To Write A Verse On Hope~❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

To Write A Verse On Hope~❤️

Rating: 5.0


O Silver shining stars -
Let me decorate this world
With golden brocade border
Before this night passes
Through the tunnel of darkness
And the morning bell rings
And moon sinks into the horizon
And candle melts in the eyes
Let me lay down beside you this midnight
And peep into your blue eyes
And write a verse on hope
So that the morning song
That every bird sings are melodious.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 07 September 2020

Beautiful sonnet writing verses on hope that someway finds a way out. Beautifully written sir. Admirations.

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Sharad Bhatia 07 September 2020

Yes, " HOPE" means " Hold on pain ends" . 100++

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 September 2020

Its nicely done. Lets read more and more before the melodious morning song

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Rajnish Manga 07 September 2020

Wonderful portrayal of nature with fascinating images of night, moon, stars and the song of hope streaming to usher this scene into a new dawn beyond a tunnel of darkness. Thanks. This is all very comforting.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 08 September 2020

Brilliantly written poem. Crafty work

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 January 2022

read this poem before I really love it

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 January 2022

I don't know why ihaven't

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 January 2022

An excellent poem loaded with spirit of optimism... well penned!

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Mamta S 11 September 2020

Very thoughtful and clear poem hb

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Michael Jack 11 September 2020

Very soothing poem from your pen,10

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