Today My Mother Died Poem by sania harris

Today My Mother Died

Rating: 4.5


Today my mother died
Silently without a sign
Never inkling about her sadness
Even though we filled her with madness
Never being a burden for us
Instead giving us all a bless

Today my mother died
The one to whom I always lied
Screaming at her for her calmness
Creating all kind of fuss
Not thinking about her loneliness
Putting her in deep distress

Today my mother died
Thinking about her past, I sighed
The times I went away
The times I never looked back
The pains she felt astray
The pains she felt setback

Today my mother died
I recalled her past and cried



(My mom is perfectly fine.. and is here with me. This poem just reflect on how I believe the feelings will be)


March 15th,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Ching 22 January 2009

heartwrenching...i know what losing a loved one feels like...my own poem 'Goodbye' is quite similar to yours...lovely poem... Leslie Ching

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Cody Passey 22 January 2009

pretty cool... its probably just me but i kinda got tired of the same rhyme scheme after awhile even though i don't do a good job of that myself i like the remorse in the poem very clear it tells a story :)

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Demon lover 22 January 2009

awwwww thats beautiful and amazing

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Genesis Learny 22 January 2009

wow this poem is very touching.its relevant to so many people who take their mother for granted.

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Dean Nordy 22 January 2009

We should be grateful to God when we're in pain, cuz its from Him.Nice poem!

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Sadness from the loss of a loved one is truly great. Time heals wounds, but some wounds leave scars that will never fade. Good job with the poem, and I wish you well during troublous times. let your grief be an inspiration.

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Jack Tex 06 February 2009

To lose a loved one is something you can't get over simple. When put into words, it's the healing power of words and rhyme that are bound to get the pain off of your heart some. I really enjoyed this one and let me tell you what, you're nothing short of a great female poet and I ain't kidding. Love, Jack

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Kite Remedy 29 January 2009

really sad, such a young writer recite her sorrow in a piece of paper.. thanks for sharing..

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Kite Remedy 29 January 2009

really sad, such a young writer recite her sorrow in a piece of paper.. thanks for sharing..

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Allan Macli Borges 27 January 2009

yes, i've already read it, but is a pleasure read it again...

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