Today My Mother Died Poem by sania harris

pretty cool... its probably just me but i kinda got tired of the same rhyme scheme after awhile even though i don't do a good job of that myself i like the remorse in the poem very clear it tells a story :)

heartwrenching...i know what losing a loved one feels like...my own poem 'Goodbye' is quite similar to yours...lovely poem... Leslie Ching

for someone so young, you've been touched by the sun the rays of light give you that insight.with the negativty and gloom, i hope that does'nt affect you too soon. it's a great write! a ten

my gosh sweetheart, , , i think i died too, , , very touching, , , so touching sweetheart....alwaz remember, mothers love s unmeasurarable... naizz

yes, sometimes its late to change our past, our mistakes. you express feelings very well. good job. i know the feeling... i didnt write to my grandma who was in another country, and when i wanted to, it was too late.

Sadness from the loss of a loved one is truly great. Time heals wounds, but some wounds leave scars that will never fade. Good job with the poem, and I wish you well during troublous times. let your grief be an inspiration.

To lose a loved one is something you can't get over simple. When put into words, it's the healing power of words and rhyme that are bound to get the pain off of your heart some. I really enjoyed this one and let me tell you what, you're nothing short of a great female poet and I ain't kidding. Love, Jack

really sad, such a young writer recite her sorrow in a piece of paper.. thanks for sharing..

really sad, such a young writer recite her sorrow in a piece of paper.. thanks for sharing..

yes, i've already read it, but is a pleasure read it again...