Togetherness Song Poem by Butch Decatoria

Togetherness Song

Rating: 4.3

Please don't leave
Oh Love, don't go

Stay with me
In the Afterglow

Peace in these
Wars of theirs devoured

Self & wish are only
To its self the power

Full of hails
Grace To marry the World

In the strong
Softness of Beloved

Please don't leave
My love, don't go...

(Stay with me in the Afterglow)

Togetherness Song
Saturday, August 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,song,together
Bernard F. Asuncion 24 August 2019

How I wish to listen to the melody of this love song, Butch. Congrats on your featured poem...10++++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 August 2019

A fantastic love song insisting the loved one to stay with in the after glow. Thanks for sharing a life song of togetherness.10 points.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 August 2019

The first two lines are repeated at the end emphasing the importance of togetherness! A lovely poem so tenderly expressed! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2019

Hustle and bustle of life! ! True love, Please don't go away! ! ! ! Don't leave me lonely. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Please don't leave My love, don't go..Strenght of true love is expressed in these simple words. Many many congratulations having been featured in POD

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George Krokos 01 January 2021

A beautiful message conveyed about love in this poem. Well done!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 25 August 2020

Very well crafted with beautiful words on togetherness as love 10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2020

In the strong Softness of Beloved Please don't leave My love, don't go... beautiful loving song; nice to read; congrats for being selected again this poem as POD

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 August 2020

Love is mysterious status of mind varieties there are the colors of feelings dawn to dusk, night to day everywhere it varies the mind differently love can give leave but can't give leave forever love wants to enjoy all colors thru the happy and sorrow time like the afterglow love wants to absorb every unseen existence of colorful unsteady mind

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Khairul Ahsan 24 August 2020

Love; even if it leaves us, it lives in our hearts 'in the afterglow'!

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Butch Decatoria

Butch Decatoria

Olongapo City, Philippines
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