Ya Allah your love and generosity
Has killed the egotistical outlook
Towards this nonsensical world
Acknowledge this little token
Of gratitude from a pining heart
© Aarzoo Mehek
Typos: There are some inadvertent typographical errors. Please correct them. I take this poignant poem to my favourite...top score!
Very true. Unless we surrender to the wishes of Almighty we roam without radar. Profound poem.
Beautiful, evocative, simple and sincere poem. Well expressed and crafted.
Five stars. It is a pity that I can't rate this poem with more stars
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hardly a few can delve deep into the essence of this prayer. I find the representation of troubled tortured souls through your poem. It's easy to present happiness of others but difficult to potroy their agony unless a poet feels their pains. You are doing a wonderful job. Keep writing!