Too Times I Fell Poem by David Wood

Too Times I Fell

Rating: 5.0


Too times I fell when climbing
Through climbing two quickly,
Going from bolder to bolder
I should have been less boulder.

But the cannon was to get to
The top quickly, go like a canon
At this great climbing sight
That all climbers had in their site.

There were several wholes in the
Rock, but on the hole, it was a
Good climb. When you reach the peek
There were several views you can peak at.

At the top you would real in the rope
And abseil down, a reel thrill.
Kicking the rock with the soul
Of your feet, twas good for the sole.

Even when I was knew to climbing
I new it would be an exciting sport.

Tuesday, December 20, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: exciting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There are several homophones in the English language, like buy and bye, they are the plague of all writers and poets! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2022

Hilarious poem, I can't stop loving..........laughing I mean....Top Score!

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Deliberate grammatical or usage mistakes using homophones, a fun adventure.

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Rob Lamberton 20 December 2022

The varied landscapes of a climb capture ones attention… your poem won me over! !

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Nice. Fantastic play on homophones. I speak, read and write three or four languages. But there is nothing like the homophones in English

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Bri Edwards 27 December 2022

The Notes may also reassure readers that the author is not completely nuts. Although a poem comment which I recently received from this author was crude and nearly cruel, I HOPE it was only a poor joke meant to be humorous. ;) ? ? bri

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Bri Edwards 27 December 2022

This WAS interesting, but I did not find it amusing. At least you posted an explanatory Poet's Notes. The Notes may help readers, not proficient in English. be alerted to intentional errors.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 December 2022

This put me in a good mood Bravo! ! !

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M. Asim Nehal 21 December 2022

Ha ha ha...humorous poem wisely written. At first i thought what you are up (two) and then enjoyed it thoroughly.

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