Transcendence Poem by Valerie Dohren

Transcendence

Rating: 5.0


Gladly will my heart surrender
At the closing of the day
When my eyes shall rest in slumber
Chasing sorrows fast away

Then to `bide in peace and silence
As the world soft fades from sight
Drifting into realms celestial
At the coming of the night

Yet the dark brings sweet redemption
With another day to dawn
When the light shall shine within me
So that I may be reborn

Floating high above in splendour
Where there is no thought of I
Nothing there will be my captor
As all fear shall pale and die

In the stillness of my being
So to seek the rising sun
With all worldliness transcended
Melding into all as one

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Quesada 23 October 2012

so i just reread this - and it was just as new to me as the first time i read it. 10 out of 10!

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Walterrean Salley 17 October 2012

Enjoyed this sweet, serene, melodious piece of work.

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Ray Quesada 15 October 2012

i seriously love this one - - have you ever read any Sara Teasdale - - your styles are similar - - i think it comes down to the true lyricism of a fine poet, as well as culminating a large portion of thought in a few lines. you are magnificent, keep sharing your great lyrics withus!

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Eric Cockrell 12 October 2012

love the serenity here... you are at peace.

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Ency Bearis 10 October 2012

An awesome poem, nice flow and pleasure to read

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Kelly Kurt 24 March 2015

A wonderful poem, filled with hope. Thank you for sharing.

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Georgios Venetopoulos 09 April 2014

Nicely written. One more beautiful read and thank you for it. G.

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Tunji Ibrahim 28 December 2012

Some transcendental experiential dadaism. The physical journey into invisible being. The celestial realms. The impulse that weaves the texture and idiom of the poem is the actual continuum of thought and matter.

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Om Chawla 28 October 2012

'Yet the dark brings sweet redemption...' and again ' nothing there will be my captor' wonderfully written ; inducing one to read it again & again. May I seek your views on my compositions 'Rebirth' and 'Cry of a Soul'.

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Robert Beck 28 October 2012

You have some of the most beautiful thoughts.

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