Mihaela Pirjol


Transient Emotions (Senryu) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

seeing rival's joy
deep ache lacerates the heart —
empathy warms it

Topic(s) of this poem: emotions

Form: Senryu


Comments about Transient Emotions (Senryu) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/2/2016 4:36:00 AM)


    Emotions are part of life! But, let us control ourselves to overcome hatred. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Terry Craddock (1/18/2016 5:31:00 PM)


    Empathy Warms Stone Heart

    tsunami wave conflicting
    emotions pain lacerating
    slices heart watching

    rival's radiant joy

    empathy warms stone
    heart rebirth regeneration
    light seeds are grown



    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Transient Emotions' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol
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  • Terry Craddock (1/18/2016 5:31:00 PM)


    Lacerating Conflicting Emotion Pain

    tsunami wave
    conflicting
    emotions

    pain
    lacerating
    slices heart

    watching
    rival's radiant
    joy

    empathy
    sunrise warms
    withering heart

    rebirth
    regeneration seeds
    may blessing grow


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Transient Emotions' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
    (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (1/18/2016 5:30:00 PM)


    Watching Rival's Radiant Joys

    tsunami waves
    conflicting emotions
    pain lacerating slices
    rapture ruptured hearts

    watching rival's radiant joys
    empathy warms bleeding hearts
    hope rebirth regeneration seeds
    may grow in blessings good wishes


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Transient Emotions' by the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
    (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (1/17/2016 2:50:00 PM)


    tsunami wave conflicting emotions, pain lacerating slices heart, watching rival's radiant joy, empathy warms the heart, rebirth regeneration seeds may grow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 17, 2016



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