Treasures Poem by Deborah Cromer

Treasures

Rating: 5.0


I heard a flock of seagulls in my car today
They sang you can run, but you cannot get away
I need more material in which to write
Creativity drawn from within my sight
I need your eyes, so much I need your eyes
They show freedom and blue from the wildest of skies
You must look into my eyes by your own choice
Often I want to ask for this, but have no voice
I could look inside your vision and take what I need
But this would be steeling and show only greed
On your own will, by only your wish and mind
By this I may see and gather all magic I find
Yes I do say magic, I feel souls so deep
I write my treasures on paper to always keep
To me this is special, but I need more to live
One look from the heart has so much to give

Monday, June 1, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

Well written Deborah... 10s

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Nikunj Sharma 17 August 2009

this is love, affection, stimulation and purity, to dive deep into the subtleties of human behavious, realtionships, you come out with pearls........I often wonder.... this is a magnum opus of simplicity and love, to rate it or vote for, would be demeaning it.............I would just don my hat.........hey dont smile at my bald head..............

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Nikunj Sharma 02 July 2009

this is awe inspiring, what else can I say? I wish I could write like you in my next birth, some day.... U are too good.... read a poem of mine called BOOKMARK and EPITAPH..

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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