Trickle Of Thought -3 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Trickle Of Thought -3

Rating: 4.7


Happiness and sadness
Are just temporary
Like the murmur of a morning breeze
That flows through the window
And the waves on the ocean
Without permanent destination.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All.Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 06 September 2019

Without permanent destination......great piece. Thank u, dear friend. anjandev roy.

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Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel 06 September 2019

Yes true, we need to know enjoying the happiness. Thank you poet.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 September 2019

Nothing is eternal in this life of ours, even happiness and sadness are temporary. In fact it is a very sad truth to realize all these. Dear Great Poetess, how sensitive sweetest are you in these words. A very caring and sensitive poem you created. A 10 Full Score! Again a very keen poem about the trickles of our thought. An amazing thought provoking poem. Magnificently worded. God´s Blessings in Abundance!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2019

Facing the ways of love and life! ! ! On earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hans Vr 11 September 2019

The feelings we feel are forever transient. But whatever feeling we feel, we can feel God's peace in our heart, in the quiet of the morning, in the softest sound of the night. We can feel the love in our heart to share and to care. Happiness comes and goes and so does sadness. The only constant in this world seems the presence of God or what He stands for in our universe

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Soran M. H 22 August 2020

note: the comment space didn't allow me to write a long comment all together, that is why I have to break it down to parts..I do apologize...thanks again to you Rose and to all of your readers

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Soran M. H 22 August 2020

part 1/ Oh dear what is a fantastic imagination and fantasy images we are finding here in this golden treasure? murmur of a morning breeze, That flows through the window....

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Soran M. H 22 August 2020

part 2/ by the way only few people who meditation the sea be able to see that the ocean waves goes to every directions And the waves on the ocean, Without permanent destination.

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Soran M. H 22 August 2020

part 3/ on the other hand; these two new metaphors strongly attached to the meaning of happiness and sadness, as they are temporary as the age of human being, very interesting and provoking idea, well done dear Poet Rose, and you get a top mark for this lovely masterpiece of work.

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Valsa George 08 March 2020

Yes, there is no fixed route or time for joy or sorrow to travel. Sometimes happiness is followed by a fit of terrible pain. Sometimes an unhappy man may become suddenly joyful. Thus life is a swing between two points - joy and sorrow. When sorrows come, let us believe that it is only temporary. Such a thought will help us swim through all difficulties. A beautiful poem unraveling a great truth!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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