# True Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# True

Rating: 5.0


Even if it sounds like true
even if samanyan believes it to be true
would Paraman [god] find it true

if in your pooja [prayer]
you would read out verses to him
he would'nt listen

he would say...sing your song
in your own word and voice
bring out the truth in you

in the rest....in the rest..he would say
i dont see you....
you donot show up TRUE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 18 May 2009

samanyan, It is remarkable poem. when somebody pray with own words and it is sincere a voice, I think that this a pray, god will listen...10... Thank you for the your kind comment... Best wishes, Tsira

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Catrina Heart 18 May 2009

There's a saying be true to your deeds and they will also be true to you........Beautiful poem written with depth meaning! ! ! 10++

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

flowing with truth concepts flowing with depth... thoughts' provoking write... evokes us to reflect 10++

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Barry A. Lanier 18 May 2009

more wisdom revealed in this poem...and yes if it quacks like a duck...and looks like duck....it isn't always a duck....

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Naidz Ladia 18 May 2009

to be true is just fine but to tell no lies, i think, there are some who can't manage..naizz

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Louis Rams 30 May 2009

be true to your heart.

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Indira Renganathan 22 May 2009

A true search of the Almighty

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Sandra Fowler 22 May 2009

Only God knows what is true for He alone can discern the thoughts and intents of our hearts. Fascinating write. Kind regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 May 2009

Paraman (God) is inside one's heart. One should look for Him inward and not outward.

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Shweta Advani 21 May 2009

So true..God cannot be pleased by words alone.He can foresee the truth behind every thought n action n that's all that matters....very meaning write.....Sir i m not rating ur poems coz as usual ythey r beyond 10...: -)

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