Two Lovers Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Two Lovers

Rating: 4.9


Under the undecorated sky
With thick clouds heavily pouring down.

Both were enjoying every drop
Lightning is intermittently taking their pictures.

Don't know whom she wants to show
They're fun, play were in youthful ways.

Moments like these were special
When they were together.

Neither any concerns nor hopes
Feeling quenched by the love pouring from the sky.

Two Lovers
Saturday, October 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 10 October 2020

Lovely picture and a beautiful poem celebrating the meeting of lovers under the rain. Rainy season is unique in the sense that each one of us- child, young or old- wants to go out and enjoy the downpour and its enchantment. Loved it. Thanks. Great observation- Lightning is intermittently taking their pictures.

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Kostas Lagos 10 October 2020

You could add a glass of wine in this beautiful poem! Nevermind! I'll drink it for the two lovers!

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Ricky Manhatten 10 October 2020

Wow, undecorated sky they were decorating the earth. Excellent poem.

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Poetic Sky 10 October 2020

Masterstroke by love poet.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2020

Under the undecorated sky With thick clouds heavily pouring down...This love poem is very brilliantly penned with amazing lovable perception...5 stars.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 October 2020

Moments! ! Muse of lovers! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 October 2020

lovers can leave and sacrifice everything where their love reach the final stage of expected enjoyment sanity!

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Ravi Kopra 10 October 2020

do deewaanay haath main haath liyay vo promenade pe chal rehay thay chahat ki meethee meethee baataiN kar rahay thay ek dum kaalay badal aasmain main ghaD-ghaDanay lagay hawaa tezi se behnay lagi, peDon par baithay paronday awaazain dainay lagay, uDnay lagay dekhtay hi dekhtay barsaat lag paDi [aur fir kya kiya unoN ne, likhaiN aap yahaN par.....]

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Deepak S S 10 October 2020

Holding in rain. Trying to catch falling drops from moments. Fantastic

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Darren Jkoeryo 10 October 2020

DJ wish to go out in rain and enjoy but too old to find a partner now. Wonderful.

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