Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

Unabated Dreams - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

These unabated dreams,
In the silent shores of sleep,
Where those glow worms
That emit perpetual light
Unto their end live,
No others enter or leave
But for we;
That is you and me

No one except you and me
Roams around that free
Their love rich mounts and valleys
That ever guard our feels

Ask the moon shy half hiding
She will tell those sweet tales
For she has remained watching
Us with hearty happy smile!

Let these dreams never end
Never end these buoyant nights
Let the dawn and her light wait
Until we say bye, my dear mate...

7th April 2008


Comments about Unabated Dreams by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (11/7/2009 10:11:00 PM)


    I have read and admired with astonishment most of your poems and I can proudly say that I am your fan. This poem is sensual and very sharing and gives off its fragrance that is deepened by feel and desire. regards, mandara (Report) Reply

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  • (11/6/2009 5:44:00 AM)


    The intrusion of glow worms are always welcome... The moon is naughty, plays hide & seek, changes forms, yet gives a comforting feel.

    Let all those dreams come true & many more happy dreams rise in you.
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  • (3/23/2009 12:35:00 PM)


    A lovely read Kesav.. Imagery and flow perfect.. My admiration and 10

    Wendy :)
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  • (2/19/2009 8:43:00 AM)


    a lovely amdience to meet the lover..with the moon to look over.. and the sun to wait under..see i become poetic when i comment on yours..lovely sir...10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2008 4:09:00 AM)


    Considering the fact that you come from a field alien to literature, the way you have woven this poetic fabric with romantic strands of thought, is no mean achievement! Carry on, Mr. Easwaran. My best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Jessel Jane Tevar Toring (12/12/2008 3:12:00 AM)


    pictures how dreams take u to infinite pleasures yet reality strikes and dreams end in the dawn of life..yet keep dreaming and writing for your love...sweet poem..hope you read one favorite poem of mine 'the mourners'..thanks (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2008 3:05:00 PM)


    The Hope of forever light into Unabated Dreams. (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2008 4:52:00 PM)


    Beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! You are a great poet!

    Karla Bardanza
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  • (12/1/2008 11:07:00 PM)


    Ask the moon shy half hiding
    She will tell those sweet tales
    For she has remained watching
    Us with hearty happy smile!

    Let these dreams never end
    Never end these buoyant nights
    Let the dawn and her light wait
    Until we say bye, my dear mate...

    - truly fantastic..
    ;)
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  • (11/29/2008 8:29:00 PM)


    this is a great poem. it touched my heart. nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2008 8:18:00 AM)


    You can master dream like your poems. Terrific. A real sweet dream you possess & you are blessed with the power of sweet monotone. (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2008 1:22:00 AM)


    A nice poem abt a love and the coziness shown in that relationship...
    Keep it up! ! !
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  • (11/26/2008 11:37:00 PM)


    I enjoyed reading this piece especially 'let these dreams never end', simply amazing and moving. (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (11/23/2008 10:59:00 AM)


    'Let these dreams never end
    Never end these buoyant nights
    Let the dawn and her light wait
    Until we say bye, my dear mate... '
    _______________________________
    I liked this stanza the most.But alas!
    Most wonderful dreams are all abated!
    _______________________________
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  • (11/23/2008 1:26:00 AM)


    talking about dreams is interesting for me..
    nice work..
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  • (11/20/2008 7:08:00 PM)


    Nice images; the best dreams are never long enough, are they? (Report) Reply

  • Elida Cumani (11/20/2008 6:45:00 AM)


    Wonderful description of love my compliments, thanx for this poem (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2008 1:34:00 AM)


    Wow.... I must say this is a complete poem... Well imagined, well penned and beautifully executed with masterful rhythm... Love, desires, triumph and then left-over craving for more... what else you want from a poet... Great read... Thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (10/31/2008 10:25:00 PM)


    the last two stanzas are stunning, , with fantastic flow, , very beautiful, , the expression ' half shy moon; ' is simply lovely, , a 10 plus from me (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2008 7:15:00 AM)


    wow that's a nice poem, i love the code and the rhythm it has, i got imaginary when i was reading it which shows that it is really an Unabated dream.......nice poem you have there Kesav very nice. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 14, 2009


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