These unabated dreams,
In the silent shores of sleep,
Where those glow worms
That emits perpetual light
Unto their end live,
No others enter or leave
No one, except you and me,
Roams around that free
These love rich mounts and valleys
That ever guards our feels
Ask the moon shy, half-hiding,
She will tell those sweet tales
For she has remained to watch us
With hearty happy smiles
Let these dreams never end,
Never end these buoyant nights
Let the dawn and her light wait
Until we say bye, my dear mate!
7th April 2008
talking about dreams is interesting for me.. nice work..
I enjoyed reading this piece especially 'let these dreams never end', simply amazing and moving.
A nice poem abt a love and the coziness shown in that relationship... Keep it up! ! !
You can master dream like your poems. Terrific. A real sweet dream you possess & you are blessed with the power of sweet monotone.
I have read and admired with astonishment most of your poems and I can proudly say that I am your fan. This poem is sensual and very sharing and gives off its fragrance that is deepened by feel and desire. regards, mandara
The intrusion of glow worms are always welcome... The moon is naughty, plays hide & seek, changes forms, yet gives a comforting feel. Let all those dreams come true & many more happy dreams rise in you.
A lovely read Kesav.. Imagery and flow perfect.. My admiration and 10 Wendy :)
a lovely amdience to meet the lover..with the moon to look over.. and the sun to wait under..see i become poetic when i comment on yours..lovely sir...10
Considering the fact that you come from a field alien to literature, the way you have woven this poetic fabric with romantic strands of thought, is no mean achievement! Carry on, Mr. Easwaran. My best wishes.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice images; the best dreams are never long enough, are they?