Unconditional Love Poem by Deependra Kumar Jha

Unconditional Love

Rating: 4.8


Whenever I’m in need,
you always stood by me
In the times of trouble,
during the moments of despair
You say, you’re my shadow,
that you will follow me forever

I love you so much,
but I hate shadows
Shadow grows and shrinks,
with fading light
I don’t want you to,
ever disappear from my sight

You urge me to be practical,
and come out of my illusions
Be someone real and strong,
don’t make castle of sands
As without a single warning,
life may slip from our hands

Nothing is timeless,
except the memories
Cherish every moment of togetherness,
and love without condition
because,
Love that comes with a reason,
may vanish with changing season

I agree with you as always
but do you listen to what my heart says?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Albalushi 16 August 2009

Love that comes with a reason, may vanish with changing season, true i agree with you, lovely poem dear Deependra, wish you all the best

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Luwi Habte 16 August 2009

nice poem well penned and sounds good as well Luwi

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 August 2009

Good poem. First she says she would be your shadow. But dont want that! And go on defining a shadow and you want her to be for ever on your side. Very good thought, well composed.

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Surya . 16 August 2009

love with out condition sure works and satisfies one, s inner feelings.nice write voted10 surys

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~ Jon London ~ 16 August 2009

Lovely piece my friend....they who share the same value of what a heart gives to us all...Love......and the greatest of lifes feeling....beautiful work Deependra 10

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

Cherish every moment of togetherness, and love without condition Rachel Ann Butler

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Seema Chowdhury 23 August 2009

i hope your heart's voice reaches the heart of the one you are trying to get to. good luck, nice poem.

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2009

enchanting poem....well expressed emotion and written well....

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Obinna Eruchie 17 August 2009

A wonderful and a distinct way of penning a love poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 17 August 2009

Love that just accompanIes may leave at one time or other in life...love that gets immersed into, will never make a shadow through out your life journey...two different perspectives of love there...good work...thanks...10...

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