Under The Snow Poem by Rini Shibu

Under The Snow

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The mirror of my mind
Reflects and shines
The thoughts which are
Pure and white
When the weather is misty
unclear and foggy
Slowly it hides in the depth of snow
Hard and frozen
Until the warmth of sunshine reaches
to melt and dissolve
The feelings then burst out of mind
To evaporateand disappear

Sunday, December 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 17 December 2018

Hi Rini, Lovely poem. Warmth of sunlight..... The fweelings then burst out of mind Evaporates and disappear... Loved this positive poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 December 2018

Wow Rini..getting to read you, quite after a long time. Superb flow of feelings.Nice poem. Subhas

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Kostas Lagos 16 December 2018

Exceptional poem, rich in images and expressions!

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Lamar Cole 16 December 2018

Great poem about under the snow.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2018

Love and life! ! Nature! The Mirror of my mind! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

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