Unfading Scares Poem by Rini Shibu
Unfading Scares
Words were so sharp
Like a bullet piercing the scalp
As if dead on the spot
She was hurt a lot
Life taught her big lesson
As the fake ones gave tension
Though the scares were unfading
They knew her love is unfading
They knew truly- her love is unfading but they feel that from the path of stray! /// nice writing
Rini, your two opening lines remind me of a poem by Carl Sandburg, a favorite poet of mine, his one titled Primer Lesson which you can find here in PH and elsewhere on line. -Glen
Words! ! Negative words! Hurt a lot. Be Strong! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing.
Hi Rini, This is a poem that bares the naked truth. Words can be sharper than a knife. It pierces the heart so strongly that it can never be erased throughout your life. A powerful poem that deserves a full score....10
One must take care when opening one's mouth or spraying ideas folks don't like to be un-admired Words often pierce good verse all love praise so your words rephrase
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 10:58:07 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Words are like sweet chocolate and sometimes words are like bullet. We shall be careful in expressing words. An amazing poem is shared.