Unfaithful Poem by lady grace


Rating: 4.8

would you smile if you saw me crying
would you run and never look back
would you laugh if you saw me dying
would you come and kiss me goodnight...

would you be happy if i touch your lips
would you swear that you'll always be mine
would you lie, would you run and hide
unfaithful love stays in your heart...

Ted M 24 July 2009

Well written.Sadness all over.

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Lynn Glover 24 July 2009

Beautiful Lady Grace, Questions, Questions, But true love always rules. Very good poem terrific job. I give you a 10. Your Friend Lynn

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Herbert Nehrlich2 24 July 2009

An abrupt finish to the poem does not take away the beauty of it. Simple, some would say trite, it is what poetry should be. H

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would you lie, would you run and hide unfaithful love stays in your heart... simply blssoming poem.. iloved it....10 mary to marry..anywhere..just reference

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Raj Nandy 24 July 2009

A sweet poem - makes one wary of 'unfaithful' love! - Raj Nandy

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Aranthabailu Ummar 28 September 2010

sun is the truth and moon is false dark is the field of earning untruth but poor boody have the strong soul it will be always there Nice to you I love your poems A Ummar

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Eyan Desir 05 April 2010

Well some ppl say they are faithful But all creatures can be decieve Like the beginning it was unfaithfulness that brought us here... Who am I not to be Maybe i will give u a flower if i saw u crying

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Siddharth Singh 11 August 2009

Love has so many different forms and one of them is unfaithful love. Wonderful.

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Rafique Farooqi 06 August 2009

Hard hearted love, kept with mad to smile over pains, of beloved. good write read mine, written truth,

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Mamta Agarwal 27 July 2009

very touching, almost childlike in its innocence. anxiety, longing, all brought out so poignantly.10 Mamta

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