would you smile if you saw me crying
would you run and never look back
would you laugh if you saw me dying
would you come and kiss me goodnight...
would you be happy if i touch your lips
would you swear that you'll always be mine
would you lie, would you run and hide
unfaithful love stays in your heart...
Beautiful Lady Grace, Questions, Questions, But true love always rules. Very good poem terrific job. I give you a 10. Your Friend Lynn
An abrupt finish to the poem does not take away the beauty of it. Simple, some would say trite, it is what poetry should be. H
would you lie, would you run and hide unfaithful love stays in your heart... simply blssoming poem.. iloved it....10 mary to marry..anywhere..just reference
sun is the truth and moon is false dark is the field of earning untruth but poor boody have the strong soul it will be always there Nice to you I love your poems A Ummar
Well some ppl say they are faithful But all creatures can be decieve Like the beginning it was unfaithfulness that brought us here... Who am I not to be Maybe i will give u a flower if i saw u crying
Love has so many different forms and one of them is unfaithful love. Wonderful.
Hard hearted love, kept with mad to smile over pains, of beloved. good write read mine, written truth,
very touching, almost childlike in its innocence. anxiety, longing, all brought out so poignantly.10 Mamta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well written.Sadness all over.