Unforgettable. Poem by Fay Slimm
Unforgettable.
The first time I saw
.................... those brown eyes
I was hooked.
................... LImpid, very wide
And inviting,
.................... he looked my way,
Stared with an
........................impudent playful
Gaze, saying he
....................... wanted me near.
I obeyed,
.............. and soon without fear
He swam closer,
................ head up and moving.
I noticed his skin,
........................... velvet smooth,
Then wonderful
........................ moments began
Seal looked at me
.............................. as we swam
In the afternoon sea,
.................................... encased
Within sun-spangled time
..................................., we raced
The tide in,
...................before he was gone
Into the deep,
.................. the seal turned upon
Me his look once again,
..................................... adoringly
Could I wish for
.......................... anything more?
A beautiful poem Fay.....your presentation too is very interesting..10+++
This scene is indelibly etched in your soul The water, the seal, filled a memory hole the excitement, the coolness, the look in his eyes you truly were blessed, one of life's highs!
Adventure of the mermaid at the new... Pleasant version, Fay..10... Tsira
My dear Fay, an unforgettable experience indeed. You and that beautiful seal together in a better and brighter world if only for a moment. Exceptional.10/10. Love, SandraX
haha, love this...i'm glad he turned out to be a seal.... he'll never break your heart!
This poem is filmic in quality. I can see that beautiful, brown-eyed marvel of nature, and those feelings of awe are palpable. This poem transports the reader to paradise. S :)
Your poem offers a combination of nature and human emotion. At first, brown eyes give no hint to who or what. I like that. Enjoyable! You describe sight and feelings well in this. Fun and interesting to read. Deborah Cromer
Stared with an ........................impudent playful Gaze, saying he ....................... wanted me near. I obeyed, .............. and soon without fear He swam closer, ................ head up and moving. Rachel Ann Butler
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Fay, love the layout. Hope your poem is something that really happened. Well written as always.10/10 Regards, Ian