Unguarded Word......Think Before U Speak! Poem by saadat tahir

Dear Saadat, there is a hidden rhyme zone and a dictionary inside your head and heart wherefrom spring forth perfectly strung colourful garlands of words.. I like the title which teaches the effectiveness of the unguarded word by the following poem...you are a master..I salute....thanks for your comment too

Hello Saadat.. I haven't read too much thought provoking ones recently.... Just turned to your page, ... I should say this poem got the usual Saadat Tahir flavor in it.... Strongest will and hardy soul. Char and writhe on carmine coal. Words said, unsaid, worlds apart. Volley’s sent, will raze ramparts Very strong and powerful, diction here.... and you are very professional when it comes to composing poems.. Great.... Cheeers shan

loose tongue and lip eh......liked your poem Saadat... Ruthy

A dazzling quatrains with a great rhyme scheme......powerful and profound! ! ! !

I agree with Mamta and Amaryllius, there are strong words here, getting into deeper images. Rhyming is fine,10 ++

Really nice stated thank you for sharing and thank you for my comment on abortion

Words that make or break. Amazing rhymes, indeed.

Excellently rhymed each word is a chosen word.A fabulous poem.

excellent poem.........its superb sir sat...... poem presents ur message in an emphatic manner so i like it very much & also word association supports ur thinking & thought very much i think i rate this poem more than 10000000000000

Don’t let hang loose your tongue…if you do so you’ll be …well you all know …excellent stuff…perfect wording…loved it Mr. Poet Saadat Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10