Unknown Song Comments

beautiful write.......... finely expressed abut unknown....

nice theme in rhymes. voted10 surya

very much in rhyme by word. rain, brain, stain

Rhymes and rhymes and rhymes.............. nice to read.

Goood write.....and nice rhymes......

lovely rhymes kranthi........

wonderful poem...a caution to everyone....a poem of love...let this poem be read to those who leave no mercy and love in their heart, body and soul... nice to be posted in every corner of any public place....serve as a warning poem.....a true poem of life...God bless.... God bless...10 +++

Fantastic rhyming scheme each line were all same yet sometimes same rhyme scheme makes the poem dull. Why not try abab rhyme scheme now sure it will make a difference in your poetic pattern into excellence. THanks! !

You are an expert at rhyme. Singing the same song of rain, stuck in the brain; Looks like you miss something or may be that someone. Season my dear friend; brings back many memories. I'm hoping some of your rhyme may rub on me.

well rhymed and thought out poem... the song of life...thats it....will only end with the dat of doom...we are just so much clown...doing our part...and curtains... your anguish shines through and......deeper is the impact.....then is immediately apparent from the poem itself.. written by a sensitized sensitive heart.....more in a msg cheers

Sort of like boxing with shadows.

what a rhyming.......congrats.........

nice lyric poem, well penned with ideas, nice rhymes..10