Unknown Song Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Unknown Song

Rating: 5.0


I sing again and again
The same song of rain
That stuck in my brain
It left my heart with stain
Which I can’t complain?

It’s a song of my bane
That I had grain by grain
It never went into drain
It gave heart lot of pain
Which I can’t explain?

It’s a song of one lain
By my heart of insane
It made me look plain
Like a derailed train
Which I can’t campaign?

It’s a song of cocaine
It’s my hearts only gain
On this warmth lane
So it not went in vain
Which I can’t sustain?

Its song of one arcane
Left my heart in blain
But it made many attain
All happiness of mundane
Which I can’t abstain?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 16 July 2009

nice lyric poem, well penned with ideas, nice rhymes..10

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premji premji 16 July 2009

what a rhyming.......congrats.........

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Joseph Poewhit 16 July 2009

Sort of like boxing with shadows.

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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

well rhymed and thought out poem... the song of life...thats it....will only end with the dat of doom...we are just so much clown...doing our part...and curtains... your anguish shines through and......deeper is the impact.....then is immediately apparent from the poem itself.. written by a sensitized sensitive heart.....more in a msg cheers

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Ted M 16 July 2009

You are an expert at rhyme. Singing the same song of rain, stuck in the brain; Looks like you miss something or may be that someone. Season my dear friend; brings back many memories. I'm hoping some of your rhyme may rub on me.

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rago rago 20 July 2009

beautiful write.......... finely expressed abut unknown....

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Surya . 18 July 2009

nice theme in rhymes. voted10 surya

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Louis Rams 17 July 2009

very much in rhyme by word. rain, brain, stain

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 July 2009

Rhymes and rhymes and rhymes.............. nice to read.

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Eyan Desir 17 July 2009

Goood write.....and nice rhymes......

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