Unleashed Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Unleashed

Rating: 5.0


Abandoned summer,
Hotter than the desert sand,
My bare body,
Trembles in your arms,
In the twelfth hour,
Like a rose made of salt,
Tepid temperatures,
They don’t make me sweat,
Altering pressure,
Masking tenderness,
Rip open your heart,
Me, I am your assassin,
I put lust in disgrace,
Love in prison,
Senses in fission,
The bent back in submission,
The arched chest in perfection,
My sole wedged in your shoulders,
Like dense in gravity,
With scents wild entrap,
And when in balance desire stands,
In invitation the open seas,
Then in an angle when you plunge,
Like a crystal I break,
In madness and oneness,
Ablaze in rage, in eternal peace,
My love for you,
Unleashed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 05 May 2009

brilliant lines that capture so well the explosion of love...

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Indira Babbellapati 04 May 2009

an intense poem on physicality of love...

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wonderful writting with a very passionated feelings

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Chitra - 01 May 2009

passion ignited and unleashed through this emotive write

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Kesav Easwaran 01 May 2009

passion and eros well mixed...and well served on a good poetic platter...thanks...10

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 15 May 2009

Energetically orgasmic!

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Uriah Hamilton 11 May 2009

Alluring. Arousing to the senses.

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Emu Getachew 05 May 2009

WOW...only a woman could pen down what most think about...

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 05 May 2009

Passionate love unleashed in poetic words, your words make this world and its creation look so nice

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Sally Plumb 05 May 2009

wonderfully strong poem

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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