'Unshakeable Love' Poem by zandile zoya

'Unshakeable Love'

Rating: 4.5


Look me in the eye
And see no lie
Penetrate through the walls of my heart
And see your Golden name written within

oh! Yes am in love with you
though sometimes i misbhave
At times my errors of judgement,
Flaws installs cracks and bruises in the union
Selfish ambitions and my narrow perceptions
Have perpetually led us astray
In a realisation of such,
I permit you to perceive me not as a perfectionist
But rather a vessel of love

Unshakeable in a union of love
We have made mistakes, not a single time
Yet there still a room for us to grow
Let’s just take it slow
And go with the flow
And the rest shall follow

Through the rough patches
We need not to rush
Through the tough times
We need not to give up
Through loneliness and misery
May the soft sound of my voice mend your heart

The reason I believe' in love is you
I shall not deceive your heart in anyway…
'but love you with MY HEART undivided'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 08 August 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 August 2013

Your words are so beautiful even to generate love r in old minds too

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Mohammad Skati 08 August 2013

It's a pretty poem. Lovely.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 August 2013

I commented on this poem last Friday and I don't know what PH did with my comment.... beautiful poem as always dear Zandi, andizotsho okunintsi ntombi. Siya_! !

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David Wood 08 August 2013

A delightful love poem. A good write.

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Ernest Makuakua 05 December 2015

hmm beautiful piece of love its so beautiful keep it up

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Chinedu Dike 08 November 2014

A lovely romantic poem from the heart. Well articulated and nicely penned with a good message to humanity. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Zandile Wardle 22 October 2013

Well Said...........you Nailed It

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Valentine Mbagu 19 August 2013

Bravo! Bravo! Bravo! Beloved you are a poet born in due season. Your words are so powerful that whoever reads your poems cannot but seek for more. I admire your courage and your gift. All hail the giftedpoet. I love your poems.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 August 2013

lovely words for lovely poem an enjoyable one thanks for sharing

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