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Valentine Novel

Rating: 4.6

Your Eyes

I met your eyes, beautiful eyes
I fell in love with your eyes, true eyes
Very sincere eyes, adorable and honest eyes

The moment I look at your eyes, I fall in love
Again and again
It's like your eyes guide the love to my veins
Travels through, hits my heart so deep

Emotions fly high like a leisure jet
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Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,romance
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 19 February 2018

Oh poet, you have created a beautiful world for the Valentine. The eyes you met have changed your whole universe. Your beautiful emphasis on her eyes will make the reader mad at your poem. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for being picked as members POD.

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Lyn Paul 19 February 2018

The title of your poem is so sweet and there is something special within your name. Who needs gift cards. It is pure love and chocolate that captures our hearts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 February 2018

What a wonderful poem! You have described eyes so immaculately! Many congratulations for this lovely poem being chosen as POD!

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Seamus O Brian 19 February 2018

I know this to be a work of fiction, because nothing can be sweeter than Ferrero Rocher. Of course, if you are young and in love, the senses can be addled somewhat; so I will believe that the author is young and truly in love. You create a few very strong, engaging images here; I would encourage even more to fill out your work. Bravo.

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Young Church Poetry 19 February 2018

The Author is young and believes in true love. Thank you very much for your comment Seamus.

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James Mclain 19 February 2018

Splendid is love, when in love.. congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Young Church 19 February 2018

Thank you very much James

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 February 2018

Very sweet eyes. Adorable poem of love! Loved it. Congratulations!

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Young Church 19 February 2018

Thank you very much Geeta.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 February 2018

Congrats, she must be having chocolate eyes sweeter than Ferrero Rocher, alovely poem.

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Young Church 19 February 2018

She does have amazing eyes, thank you very much Akhtar.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

your eyes sparkle with true love.......true love on Valentine's Day. Beautiful poem on love.

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Young Church 19 February 2018

Thank you very much Mahakul, true love still exists even today.

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Alison Gaff 01 May 2017

you asked if I would read your new poem 'Suicide' by I have for personal reasons to read one of your other poems 'Valentine Novel'. A lovely poem, with love running through it from first word to last.

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Young Church 19 February 2018

I am glad you loved this one, thank you very much.

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Cigeng Zhang 13 February 2016

A sweet and beautiful work. May your life be rosy like the colour in the poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Young Church 19 February 2018

Thank you very much Cigeng, sweet words coming from you.

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