Vault Of Heaven Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Vault Of Heaven

Rating: 4.6

I was running across the fields with the wind in my hair,
Lying on the grass and counting the stars,
I was picking the shells digging my toes in the sand,
Picking up the bits and pieces of my life, looking at myself
In the shattered pieces of mirror on the floor
Looking for love in an empty urn, believing all is well
Holding on.......holding on......

Lost in thought lost in time
While the world turned around and time did fly,
With all the things you said and did, running in my head,
This irresistible tug I felt at my heart
Through our silence we found our way
Through the memories which never existed
I took a celestial ride through our hush
Its time to take your hand and ride the waves
Waves of unending affection to the vault of heaven
Holding on..... holding on..........

David Threadgold 14 October 2008

Hi Reshma. A well put together piece and a great dedication. thanks for the read. Regards Dave T 10/10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 October 2008

Love shines tremendously in dedication. fine piece reshma! 10++

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Ramesh T A 14 October 2008

Nostalgic muse in Nature is always inspiring with renewed vigour to poets like me. Your Vault of Heaven has revealed that sense very well. Enjoyable piece!

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Kee Thampi 14 October 2008

a poem made from heartful dedication was picking the shells digging my toes in the sand, Picking up the bits and pieces of my life, looking at myself In

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Abhilash Gopi 03 December 2008

hmmm. The feelings from your heart says it all. Nothing much to say. It can be felt.

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Sim Dan 22 November 2008

First, thanks for the invitation to your 'vault' - splendid job - true feelings always show the warm heart from where they spring. And hilarious intro - had a hearty laugh. Bangalore, hah! Thanks again! sim

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

Both reviving and inspiring! ! To hold on..-so encouraging.

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, aryaindia 20 October 2008

Artfully written, your poem stuns in its breathtaking flight of fancy, holding on to life by a single thread that is so tasteful in expression. arya

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Sadiqullah Khan 15 October 2008

such powerful expression, , , each line is worth reading again and again, , ,10

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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