View Of Stupidity.. Poem by Nashy Lamen

View Of Stupidity..



Note: Before you read this I'd like to point out that everything is false. I have no intentions of doing it. I just had nothing to write.. I love life! .. *laugh* then smile...

Keen eyes as I stare down the corner of the room,
laying down in the fire of ice as I meet my doom,
A blade by my side, pointed at my wrist,
Quavering as I fall with wide eyes and clenched fist.

The envy I have felt, the pain I have taken,
Results to a heart now withered and broken,
Crushed by the problems that spins through my head,
As I let myself slump and sag down my bed.

Blood flows through my body, awaiting to gush out,
The blade so sharp digs deeper and deeper down my wrist,
And as the first dropp of blood falls to the ground,
My eyes, they now blur as I spin around.

I then pulled the blade as it sinks through my skin,
Now covered in red and drenched down with much sin,
I let it all flow as I remember the past,
And see why I ended my life so fast,

I dropped the blade and I was so weak,
My eyes now were closed and I heard loud shrieks,
I drowned in my blood as I took my last breath,
and that was the end, that was my death.

-nash

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danzen D. 08 March 2009

The picture so clear...I imagine a girl dressed in red...in her own elegant room..it was all so...red...nice poem. The flow...the pain, anger and grief...tears that form in the eyes...the strength of the pain of the heart overpowered physical pain...

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Christine Kerr 03 March 2009

Thank You for adding your first line, Cause the rest seemed to flow with such ease. A very well piece of poetry indeed

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