Violent Roar Breaks Down Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Violent Roar Breaks Down

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When vices capture a person,
When his mind is motivated by his senses
When he forgets his real duty,
When he tries to fulfill his greedy desires,
He follows unrighteous way and becomes violent,
Forgetting his original dignity and values,
He means soul no more desires to drive body
But he allows his body to drive him,
Then danger dances in front of him.

A violent man roars to break down others,
Like the thunder breaks cloud's core,
Violent man cuts his life through jealousy,
Creating terrible situation he blames others,
His vision becomes very blind and worse,
Giving his whole efforts, time and energy,
He provokes himself and causes harm to others,
But when his blood dries up and he feels weak,
He roars but suddenly falls down on ground.
Violent roar does not last for long,
It breaks down and it breaks down soon.

A violent man's cyclone like long provocation
It does not at all affect a calm and stable man,
Because, stable minded man bows down soon
In front of such cyclonic storm and saves himself,
Cyclone comes and goes away doing timely destruction,
But a calm man keeps courage of re-construction,
A calm man bows down it does not mean that he is defeated,
His little bowing breaks down the big violent roar
And also it breaks down the large cyclonic storm,
Violent roar seems to have huge power
Bit it does not have power at all,
Calmness has great power!
A calm man sure becomes victor!

© Kumarmani Mahakul,28 December 2018. All rights reserved.

Friday, December 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,truth,perception
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 28 December 2018

A remarkable philosophical poem, Kumarmani........................

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Valsa George 06 October 2019

But if violence is met by calmness, it brings untold goodness to the man who meets violence with calmness. Of the two.... the peaceful man establishes victory over the man of violence, though he may seem vanquished in the eyes of at least some. When one allows his violent emotions to rule him, he lands in danger! A poem that has sprung up from a very mature outlook on life.

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Valsa George 06 October 2019

Calmness has great power! A calm man sure becomes victor! You are absolutely true.....! Violence against violence begets only violence and destruction.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 January 2019

Huge power! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kostas Lagos 28 December 2018

Impressive poem. A calm man sure becomes victor! .Wonderrrful!

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 28 December 2018

A great lesson in the poem.Very well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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