Voice Of Patience Poem by Chandini Jaswal

Voice Of Patience

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While thou flogged me,
I beseech'd ye:
'Pity pity and forgive,
Pardon me and let me peacefully live'.

But now I curse thou,
For heavens will know bounds
As I today take a vow,
That I will not be tormented by iniquitous bloodhounds.

My patience
Has costed me my life's essence.

Friday, July 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: ancient,anger
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem describes how 'patience' reacts when even patience cannot stand torture anymore.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 28 July 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Chandini. That is the reaction of conscious. But what is happenning underneath could also be understood. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Chandini Jaswal 12 August 2017

Thank you Sir! Regards

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