Wake Children Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA

Wake Children

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Wake children don’t kip,
It is morning, have skip.
Brush your teeth eat food,
Pray to God in right mood.

Say good morning to dad, mum,
Start your work in a hum.
At the morning do your sum,
Write handwriting daily some.

Go to school in ten O’ clock,
Go everyday do not block.
Respect your teacher obey them,
Don’t tease to dumb and lame.

Perform school work till to four,
Return home, meet mum at door.
Help her if she needs your help,
Then you play with pals yourself.

Love your friends do not slug,
Co-operate them with a hug.
In evening wash hands and feet,
Read, write up to nine and eat.

Go to bed soon after eating,
Early sleep leads early getting.
Transfer mind to God on sleep,
You do lesson at dawn’s peep.

Wake Children
Monday, August 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,life,love,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is a song in favour of children. Poet advises the children not to sleep at the morning. He says, “It is morning, wake up and have exercises, brush teeth, eat food and pray to God in silence. Convey good morning to father and mother and then start your study. Do your mathematics at morning time. Have handwriting daily at the morning too. Go to school at time every day. Respect your teachers and obey them. You must not tease dumb and lame persons. Perform your school work till the school is over then come to home. Help your mother and then play sometimes. Love your friends and co-operate them. In evening, wash your legs and hands and then maintain study hour up to nine to night. Then go to bed and sleep. Before sleep you pray God and hand over your body to him. Early sleep helps to get up early in the morning. At morning time you can remember well.” This is the theme of the poem in thumbnail. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Kip – sleep, Hum – be in active state, Hug – squeeze tightly in one’s arms, Slug – hit hard.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 10 August 2015

All good advice for healthy, intelligent and moral children.

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Jaishree Nair 10 August 2015

Well rhymed.enjoyed the theme.Being a teacher I can easily relate to the lines.Thanks for sharing. Good message

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 10 August 2015

A good piece of advice for the young ones

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Akhtar Jawad 10 August 2015

Kumarmani Mahakul writes beautiful poems for the children, here is another. Incidentally schools open, today, here at Karachi after summer vacation.............................10,

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Mark Heathcote 10 August 2015

Western children could do with these wise lessons, good poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2019

Muse of the children. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Ramin Ara xNicely expressed, , , Sir, , , 11 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xEloquent ideals will reveal successful students. 11 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of sunprincess ? ? ? x..........beautiful poem...having a routine is always best....thanks for sharing ? 11 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ? ? ? | Reply picture of Freedom Writing xCute children 11 Aug 2015 by Freedom Writing | Reply picture of Chris Fortune xExcellent poem! Very heartfelt and nostalgic. 11 Aug 2015 by Chris Fortune | Reply picture of Colten Sorrells xA beautiful tribute 11 Aug 2015 by Colten Sorrells | Reply picture of manisha uniyal xBeautiful poem with a lovely message sir 11 Aug 2015 by manisha uniyal | Reply picture of Elizabeth Squires xBeautiful piece my friend. Thanks for sharing. 11 Aug 2015 by Elizabeth Squires | Reply picture of Yogish Shetty xNice one. well coined with right advise. 11 Aug 2015 by Yogish Shetty | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely advice, sounds like my childhood beautifully penned tfs xoxoxo blessings dear 11 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of venkata lakshmi narasimharao xgood advice for children who are the future citizens. 13 Aug 2015 by venkata lakshmi narasimharao | Reply picture of Kesav Easwaran xBeautiful write Kumarmani...I find the best teacher in you in this poem 14 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply picture of Scott Hemingway xStrong meter. 19 Aug 2015 by Scott Hemingway | Reply

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 27 August 2016

Its all about best manners, from parents to kids. Kids with good manners shape their parent well. Draw picture of where they come from, and the home also. Thanks for this amazing poem.10!

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 August 2015

Nice advice to the children.Loved it.

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Valsa George 13 August 2015

A wonderful code of conduct for children! If we can make children practise these lessons in life, their future is assured and they will grow into loyal citizens of the nation bringing honour and glory to everyone!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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