Walking The Temple Dog Poem by Denis Mair

Walking The Temple Dog

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Out of the unbounded, and into a pair of Converse tennis shoes!
Morning meditation over, I come downstairs,
Approaching Lucky in the gray light, leash in hand.
He spins crazy circles at the end of his chain,
I raise a stick to make him crouch… just as a game,
The quick way to fasten the leash and start our walk;
Then he lunges like a bloodhound hot on the trail,
He leans against my drag like a sled dog,
He treats me like I'm just a dead log;
He wheezes from pulling me so hard.
Poor Lucky, you are not enjoying your walk,
Tugging at cross purposes won't get us to the park,
You are a bundle of nerves!
Your collie-shepherd features could be regal
But they lose their handsomeness
When you hunch your head and shoulders
To pull in a direction we are headed anyway.
Get a clue, you packet of excess muscle!
The way you strain against resistance
Evaporates your energy into the void;
You turn the spigot of vitality wide open;
How much will be given to you in this life?
You've got to learn to subtilize your kundalini;
You've got to turn your drives into a snake dance.
Being a temple dog, you are called upon to learn this.
Just now I was having my morning sit, just sitting;
The whole universe was taking me for a walk.
I did not yank and pull; I wanted to see where I could go.
You and I could cruise along, smelling all kinds of bushes.
We could be parading our smooth gait on other blocks.

It's time to teach Lucky not to pull.
I don't follow a police-dog training program.
I don't use a torture collar that tightens and chokes;
Whenever Lucky yanks I simply yank back.
Here we go.Stop hunching like you're ready to pull:
Take that.Don't forget I'll respond to you.
Take that.That's how my shoulder feels when you pull.
Don't pull.Take that.YELP!
I look sheepishly around for Animal Liberation.
Each time I yank, I should yank as an enlightened mentor,
But my temper insists on giving lessons to Lucky.
My temper takes us both for a walk, yanking and yanking,
While Prokofiev in my headphones stirs up the drama.

Lucky is a smart dog: after four days he gets the idea.
He's careful not to pull, but he makes tight turns
He burns off his excitement by doing figure-eights,
Runs loops as I change the leash from hand to hand.
We have the routine down. Based on the ratio of pi,
I figure he covers three times the distance I walk

By gray light I slip downstairs in the morning,
The atmosphere quivers with glissades of violin.
I scan for a nervous edge, wanting to hear the city's mood;
When 'Classical 105' starts up a stodgy old-time theme,
I switch to 'Power 106, Where Hip-Hop Lives.'
Lucky leaps up to meet me, upending his empty bowl:
It is only a dusty dented bowl of tin;
Under my breath I say, 'This is Mambrino's helmet.'[1]
With these words, I observe my entry to the antic realm,
Where anything could be the wreckage of a dream.
Lucky is my animal familiar, conducting me
To moments of primal life, away from human-centeredness.
Lucky is my totem animal, now altered by nearness to Man,
Who leads me back around to the Nature I live within.
I run with my lodge brother, casting my eyes about
For things to gather up and keep close inside,
As gifts for the lodge partners I hope to run beside.


[1] Don Quxote 'recognized' a barber's basin as Mambrino's helmet and claimed it as his own. He believed that the helmet's true appearance had been altered by sorcery.

Tuesday, March 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,meditation,walking
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 31 March 2017

A breathtaking write- - The whole poem got me hooked from beginning to end- - - - So marvelously written-, Your pet dog Lucky is lucky to have a master like you- - The last stanza is very significant as it says how we are also influenced by our pet's faithfulness and love for us. Lucky is my animal familiar, conducting me To moments of primal life, away from human-centeredness. Lucky is my totem animal, now altered by nearness to Man, Who leads me back around to the Nature I live within. I run with my lodge brother, casting eyes about For things to gather up and keep close inside, As gifts for the lodge partners I hope to run beside.

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Denis Mair 31 March 2017

Thanks for having the patience to read it through to the end. I am ambivalent about the affection lavished on dogs by humans. Perhaps it is a symptom of urban loneliness. Dogs were bred to be affectionate, so their affection is available on demand, like tap water. A cutting-edge artist or yogi has to maintain concentration, and keeping a dog may distract him or her from the path. A friend of mine who is devoted to yoga said that true yogis of the past avoided having emotional attachments to animals. They even avoided eating honey because their soul might be muddied by incurring a karmic debt to honeybees. That being said, I am still a fool for dogs. I like to observe them, and I feel sorry for them if they don't get enough exercise. Perhaps I am being too judgmental toward people (myself included) who form emotional bonds with dogs. In my poem I try to show the ridiculous side of human-canine companionship, but I also try to show the genuine bond that exists. John Steinbeck travelled around America with his dog Charly, but I think some novelists I admire probably had little to do with dogs (for instance Dostoyevsky) . Picasso was a dog lover. I cannot imagine writing poetry without borrowing an animal perspective sometimes. The inner world of a human being is built on a foundation of animal desires and motives. Imagining the life of animals helps us define how we fit into the Creation.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2017

I look sheepishly around for Animal Liberation. A nice poem on a pet.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 20 July 2019

Cntd 2 I thought she was gonna end up dead or seriously injured. Fortunately, she returned to me unscathed, but not in response to my mad yelling. She has a mind of her own.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 20 July 2019

Cntd. It’s very entertaining, Denis! So detailed and well-written. What adventures you had with your “animal familiar.” A dog's world is a whole new world for us humans. I’m discovering that with our new puppy, a female Labrador. Yesterday, I unwisely took her off her leash when we were past the horses up on the open hill, and she took off, got under the electric tape, and raced about in amongst about six horses.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 20 July 2019

It’s very entertaining, Denis! So detailed and well-written. What adventures you had with your “animal familiar.” A dog's world is a whole new world for us humans.

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Glen Kappy 18 July 2018

i smiled with recognition reading much of this, denis—not from ever having my own dog but mostly from watching others with theirs in my early morning walks. (my daughter-in-law did have a dog, now passed, that i walked a few times. looking like part whippet and smallish, he still pulled hard.) i relate to the bit at the end about lucky being a totem animal. also on a dog, you might like my recent poem mutual trust if you haven't read it already. -glen

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 September 2017

I enjoyed your lovely descriptive write. Your temple dog sounds so much like my dog who was also born to run and on our morning walks she exhibits almost identical behavior. I also read with interest your comments on emotional attachment to animals is not desirable in a life of strict devotion. I guess it may be a few more lifetimes for me :)

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Denis Mair 05 September 2017

Thanks for coming along on the morning walk. I will reveal a secret I have kept until now. I want to write a series of poems called TEMPLE DOG. I have over twenty titles, and for every topic, there are things I really want to express, memories I have rehearsed and mulled over. The dog would be a focal point or window, to show people at a temple in Los Angeles. There were people from different waves of the Chinese diaspora: Taiwan, Mainland, Hong Kong. There were people of different temperaments, brought out in amusing incidents surrounding the dog. Also, my telling of those incidents would include portraits of the people, and how they made their way in an American setting. So picturing the island of a Chinese temple in the urban ocean of L.A. would be full of revelations. But that would have to emerge from everyday life, which is why my ideas for this series started crystallizing around the dog Lucky. I have the 20-plus titles and a few jotted notes for each, with lots of long-pent memories. If I could write WALKING, I can do the rest, but I have to summon up the love that will fuel the whole project. Also I have to hurry up and do it while the details are still floating about in my head. I know it is possible, because my friend Luo Ying wrote a series of narrative poems based on his memories of China's Cultural Revolution (1966-1976, a period of leftist extremism) . Luo Ying was a boy then, but he wrote wonderful memory poems in his mid-50s. How did he do it? He took it as a personal responsibility to call out the events of that time before his own private tribunal. How did he go so far back and bring his boyhood alive, amid all the distractions of modern trends? He did it by the magic that a poet should command. But also, he worked hard. He used the resources of his company to sponsor an oral history project in his home province. He read oral histories from people of all walks of life who went through that period. Also, he organized and sponsored a conference that project. All of this revivified his memories. and he made a book of it. Later it was published in English translation under the title MEMORIES OF THE CULTURAL REVOLUTION (University of Oklahoma Press) . So I know it is possible and I should do something like what he did, with the materials I have to hand.

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