it is kite, it is kite flying in the sky
sowing sound shrill sound long and high
do you know what is it, looks like a huge kite?
in angry seems same to a Chinese change'e to fight.
'it is not a kite' someone says
it is a fighter plane others say in gays
war war it is war to kill the man
so many lives will go to hell O the man!
hearing this my heart is trembling and trembling
panic in panic in it is gasping and quaking
is it not the war-world three is commencing?
yes yes no doubt, it is in the offing.
All the bards on this sweet lil planet have the same heart, fortunately, and so they keep the lives smeared with hope and delights for ever more. Your misgivings expressed in these lines reminds me of the ocean of dispondency that william wordsworth expressed in ' Resolution and Independence' / The Leach Gatherer', where the poet shares the common destiny of the beauty making mass; the poets, and even gives the examples of the baby poet Chatterton and the farmer poet, Scottish, Robert Burns. Let us harness, roll up our sleeves, if we can motivate and empower warriors in the battle fileds, we can sure pacify the remaining, rotten-hearted megalomaniacs of this earth. Sit not silent, sharpen your pen and start sending fiercing arrows to explode those brains of mean manipulations; the so called poilitical power craving crooks. Thank you, your lines made me express this much. God bless. Take care. Join the stride. Regards. Tajudeen Shah
Its a kite that flying.... The anger make metal kite able to float But lets we release the dove to free To end something before started Shut the hate down from the sky, let the peace back to the ground
thanks...mere a formal thanks would be less to greet you....i think though. instead a metal kite....dove to be released....what an image you have drawn....very significant..... your image has a touch of pathos...... have nice time.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
War has no answers towards peace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.