War - Senryu Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

War - Senryu

Rating: 4.6

A crowd of sorrows
Brings carnage that drives people
To its lowest lows.

Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Dr. M. Asim Nehal 16 March 2022

A war can never have a better definition than this one. How wonderfully you summed up about the war in this Senryu 👏 full stars...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2022

A Senryu full of Brilliance, excellently worded 5 Stars full score and much much more!

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Richard Wlodarski 16 March 2022

Heart-wrenching and of the highest order!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 March 2022

Yes, dear Rose! War is ever so depressing. A Senryu so poignant and insightful.....10

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Pallab Chaudhury 16 March 2022

Very true and depicting the current grave situation... well done...5* from me/pc

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 March 2022

Truth spelt out wonderfully in a few words, succinct yet carries all the features of a war, full stars

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Rebecca Navarre 27 March 2022

Excellently expressed! .. Hearts that are ever so deeply filled with tears! .. Definite! .....5 Stars! ..+++++

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Words Out Of The Mind 18 March 2022

Rat, rat, tat a tat....machine gun fire

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

War spells the end of the world for many lives. The dictator's mind, whose heart is taken over, can not be read…

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Kevin Patrick 17 March 2022

Nothing is solved through war, accept death and devastation. The only thing won is a grave for millions. fantastic senryu Rose. Its message still rings true

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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