Was It Real Or I Was Dreaming? Poem by Anna Jonson

Was It Real Or I Was Dreaming?

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when i was listening to my heart's beating
i woke up by a knock on the door
my heart stopped; i felt afraid
i wondered, i asked: who's that?
but i had to open the door
now or before...
when i opened the door
i saw someone whom i knew before
he was crying, and a little alarming
he said that your lover has died
i couldn't belive, when he said that thing
is it real or i'm dreamimg?
then i found out that it was real
i wasn't dreaming and i had to believe
at that time the sorrow comes
without permission or knocking door
only two ways that i had to go
killing myself or living alone..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 15 April 2009

Things by now have changed the rivers flow to you as well heart a knock the door lashed shut not knowing gone a name to bring in home of hearts released... :) ..iip

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Jhon Fernandis 08 November 2008

wooooooooooooooooow i like this this is a true poetry having lots of feeling expression and have a lucid way so all of that i like this poem i like you'r poem 1,2,3 and 5 but i hasnot read this poem now i will read this poem next time and then i will give some comments i am going to add you as a friend

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<font color=black>Nagourta 10 October 2008

That's so sad. I am so glad that it hasn't happened to me. I would be...*sound*

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Chrispin Kamara-Johnson 08 October 2008

Nice one Anna i love this one especially. great job.

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Manonton Dalan 05 October 2008

men don't cry so it must be a dream. thanks for living to write such beautiful poem. thanks.md

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Sonali Ganguly 31 March 2016

loved the poem..... very nice

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Celia Amantea Schulz 01 November 2015

Yes profound feeling...a few words seem out of place but the idea is right there

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Anita Sharma 12 September 2015

profound sadness..loved it

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Charity Nduhiu 24 August 2015

Anna, this is so sad for you sometimes things don't happen the way we plan. Please dont kill yourself. I like the poem

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

this speaks in volumes and has a profound impact to it..wonderful work u amazing!

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