Harley White


Water, Water - Poem by Harley White

‘Water' seems a fitting title
of this rhyme on something vital
for the beings we take care of
and the others we're aware of.

Life on Earth depends on water,
whether human or sea otter,
fish or fowl, whatever creatures
having some subsistence features.

Water may have been existent
in archaic ages distant
long before we tend to think—
even water that we drink.

Yet when in our galactic history
it was formed has been a mystery…

The researchers have debated
as to if it could be stated
that this liquid can be dated
back to when it's been related
there was a disk of gas and dust
and molecules that were a must
for water that originated
when our ‘system' was created
(namely, ‘solar', where we're fated) …

Or might it be more antiquated? !

Could we trace to outer space
the genesis that took place
of the water in our glass?
If indeed this came to pass,
it would open up new queries,
not to mention E.T. theories…

But that's within the jurisdiction
of those who compose science fiction.

Many scientists have avowed
that from the Sun's parental cloud
of interstellar dust and gas,
from which our star derived its mass,
water, well, to be precise,
water in the form of ice
was inherited there and then,
in that olden where and when…

Some astronomers theorize
that what we may not realize
is up to half the H2O
within the oceans that we know
right here on Planet Earth could be,
yes, older than the Sun we see
illuminating from on high,
in daylight's path across the sky,
our frets and frolics down below,
where heedlessly we come and go…

Water and life go hand in hand,
from briny deep to wooded land.

In the mariner's rhyming tale,
all the winds at sea did fail,
and the sailors lives were lost—
the idle ship was merely tossed
as if on a painted ocean,
painted ship, devoid of motion.

There was water ‘every where',
Coleridge says, except that there
was none to quench their parching thirst;
so the voyage seemed doubly cursed.

Water is such precious stuff!
Do we value it enough?

Oh, may there never come a time
(as in that famous rhyming rime)
when as to water here on Earth—
where mortals meet their death and birth—
we too will ever need to think
that there is not a drop to drink!



< October 8,2014 >

Topic(s) of this poem: water

Form: Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Inspiration for the poem was from an article (online) entitled, 'Earth's water is older than the Sun', in Astronomy Magazine, on September 25,2014...

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Image ~ NASA ~ Artist’s conception of a protoplanetary disk

Comments about Water, Water by Harley White

  • (10/25/2017 5:21:00 AM)


    MS. White, water is life of earth and beings V.good.The existence life on earth depends upon protection of nature..A nature poem I eshrined 'Beings' Silent Request' U. may come across. (Report) Reply

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  • Bill Cantrell (1/1/2017 12:08:00 PM)


    What most people see as a common simple drop of water, you see as a orb of fluidic wonder, and this is what poetry is all about! , yes...water water everywhere and not a drop to drink, there is no carbon dating on the face of water, yet a glacier will reveal time to an extent until thawed, then we are back to square one, I truly appreciate the research you do before writing a poem, I have never seen another poet like you, thanks so much for posting. (Report) Reply

    Harley White (1/1/2017 3:49:00 PM)

    Thank you so much for your eloquent comments! I can hardly express how much your words encourage me... like water for a thirsty plant...

  • (4/5/2016 11:21:00 AM)


    long, captivating and amazing, love every line
    thanks
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    Harley White (10/25/2017 6:34:00 AM)

    Thanks very much for your response!

  • Edward Kofi Louis (2/5/2015 3:02:00 AM)


    Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    E.K.L.
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    Harley White (12/2/2015 9:18:00 AM)

    So glad you liked it...

  • Kim Barney (12/13/2014 6:56:00 PM)


    This is a great poem.
    A little bit long, but very well written.
    I'm surprised that no one has commented on it before.
    (Report) Reply

    Harley White (12/2/2015 9:19:00 AM)

    Thank you for the comment... I appreciate it...

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 23, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 2, 2015


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