We Are Nearing The Shore Poem by Sathya Narayana

We Are Nearing The Shore

Rating: 5.0

Beautiful is that distant shore,
flourishing with lavish lush verdure.

Tall trees in tune with wind's tremolo
are swaying their heads in wild gusto
as if saying no to all worldly woes!

Flitting white doves in free skies
and glittering silvery sands; all encore
seem to be vowing peace, comfort and more!

Is that not the haven we're trying to discover...
the ultimate Utopia of Thomos More!

Ahoy, my fellow rowers of ‘Bharat' boat...
let not sloth rust your grits,
rest not yours oars even for a minute!

Let sweat evaporate; of few more droplets,
let brawn burn into some more effort!

There behold O' dear Indians...
a great future is well within our sight,
gleaming with beams of prosperity!

We Are Nearing The Shore
Monday, September 1, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: behold,boat,indians,rust,sweat
Shalini Kts 02 September 2008

the flow in the poem is so awesome, shore's beauty is here in your poem

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Indira Babbellapati 02 September 2008

is shore end of sailing or respite from the woe-ridden...? shore is always tempting to a sailor...r nt we all sailors?

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Subbaraman N V 02 September 2008

A great call to our compatriots! A ni9ce poem. Thanks for sharing!

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Ency Bearis 02 September 2008

a captivating write...well versed...great... Ency Bearis

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H K 02 September 2008

So deeply motivational....Those words serve an intangible asset to your nation...Great write.

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Koyel Mitra 15 September 2008

This is an excellent poem.Well-selected words.A 10.

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David Threadgold 08 September 2008

Hi Sathya. what a great piece of work showing the great effort neededto reach your goal. well done Regards Dave T.

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Sandra Fowler 07 September 2008

Very positive. It is as easy to see sunshine as it is to see shadows. My ten in return. Warm regards, Sandra

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ngaio beck 07 September 2008

Wow! This is a very inspiring write, (and I no longer inspire easily) .

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Just beautiful Sathya Bhaiya- these are the songs which need to be sung to each other; though through barbed wires and gulf of mistrust

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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