Esther Leclerc

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Weakness - Poem by Esther Leclerc

try
don't

give in
won't

fight
hide

lie down
you die


(7.5.06)


Comments about Weakness by Esther Leclerc

  • (8/25/2006 9:38:00 PM)


    Esther, I suspect this has come from somewhere deep. Curious poem. What triggered it, the reader wonders... which makes it a fine poem. incidentally, I hate the word 'try'.
    love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/27/2006 9:31:00 PM)


    ELEVEN WORDS...PRACTICED BY TOO MANY PEOPLE WHEN THEY ARE TOLD THERE IS NO HOPE OR THEY SELF-INLICT THAT NOTION ON THEMSELVES PRE-MATURELY....SOBERING PIECE OF FINE WORK, ESTHER
    ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR
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  • (7/10/2006 10:06:00 PM)


    What a funny little quirky poem that says so much in so few words! Right to the point, and well done! (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2006 5:35:00 AM)


    Dear Esther
    You write from a deep place and your feelings are well displayed, don't give in,
    Love duncan X
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  • Brian Dorn (7/8/2006 12:11:00 AM)


    Esther, you got straight to the point on this one, absolutely no wavering. Well said.
    Brian
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  • (7/7/2006 9:26:00 AM)


    Was this a poetry-in-motion submission? Has that cryptic feel from the reductionist writing... -chuck (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 5, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 13, 2010


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