Well Spotted… Bri Edwards Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Well Spotted… Bri Edwards

Rating: 5.0


Bri has such a beady eye,
He picks out my mistakes,
A comma here a comma there,
Is that really what it takes?
To be the perfect poet,
To shine amongst the stars,
I forget to dot the i's again,
It won't do any harm.
I'm always up for comments,
So thanks again kind sir,
I'm pretty new to this old game,
And life's a learning curve.


Jayne Louise Davies

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As I always say. I welcome any comments from you Bri :) That's not saying i always listen :) I'm a stubborn old bird! Lol x
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 29 March 2023

SOme people have bad habit of poking their dirty nose everywhere, keep going and learn from the masters not from the jokers.

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2023

4 stars for poem plus 1 more for mentioning my name.....twice! ! ! TOTAL = 5. : ) bri

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 March 2023

Well thank you Bri : ) No mistakes? I must be improving with age : ) lol x

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Kim Barney 29 March 2023

Carry on, Jayne! Pay no attention to Bri, though he's a good guy, with his beady eye.

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 March 2023

I don't Kim : ) I just take it on the chin : ) lol x

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Jayne Louise Davies 31 March 2023

Thank you everyone for your comments x Much appreciated : ) : ) xx

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Richard Wlodarski 30 March 2023

2) Poets writing in a conventional style can benefit from Bri's constructive criticism. However, a free verse writer/poet like Jack Kerouac would have been stopped in his tracks had he adhered to that type of constructive criticism. Free verse should not feel restictive!

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Richard Wlodarski 30 March 2023

If the mistakes are unintended, then that kind of constructive criticism is GREAT. However, if the mistakes are intended, and/or one is writing free verse, then that constructive criticism can hinder the poet/poetess.

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D.N. Rebb 30 March 2023

I'm wondering if Bob Dylan is arrogant enough to think he's a good singer

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Jordane Parkes 29 March 2023

Beautiful poem

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Jayne Louise Davies

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