Westering Sun Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Westering Sun

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Westering sun like our life is too near to horizon,
Waist not your valuable time, accept right provision.
Whack your despondency it is eleventh moment,
Wheedle don’t, life wheel is too fast in movement.

Wash-out will not come if you have righteous deeds,
Watchfulness you keep always life has valuable needs.
Watchmen to top officers all will have westering sun,
Weaklings you mustn’t be, wait for beautiful dawn.

Way-out life you lead till coming of rising sun,
Wealth, body can’t go with soul but resolves can run.
Waywardness you give up soon, accumulate good resolves,
Weeny soul is eternal but after death body soon dissolves.

Welcome to divine qualities like truth, nonviolence, peace,
Wend to earn knowledge, sympathy, co-operation, never miss.
Wenches are your sisters respect them and love them,
Wholly you perform your work always with good aim.

Whole-hearted person you should be, deliberately do work,
Whole day you link with God, he will remove your murk.
Wholesome life you will have, you can overcome westering sun,
Whatever the darkness would be, it must be bright morn.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: advice,life and death,nature,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Here poet says about the last time of the life saying as westering sun. The sun sets at west horizon and then after it gets dark and becomes night. But night can’t linger long. Bright morning comes. So also human gets happiness after pain or get rebirth after death. So as a human being we must perform moral deeds. This is the theme of the poem in thumbnail. This is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Glossary
Westering – moving towards the west
Whack – produce a solution etc. by vigorous thoughts
Wheedle – coax by flattery
Wash-out – complete failure
Way-out – excellent
Waywardness - childish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 October 2015

Wonderful, Wise, Wisdom all packed in your poem perfectly.Loved it sir.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

Whole-hearted person you should be, deliberately do work, Whole day you link with God, he will remove your murk. Wholesome life you will have, you can overcome westering sun, Whatever the darkness would be, it must be bright morn. Verily, a lovely poem with each line with a w. The westering sun gives the warning of an ending day to calculate what is left to be done and also gives the happy tidings of a new dawn. Loved reading and commenting.......10

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

Inspirational. Gives hope and peace. Thanks

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Mihaela Pirjol 03 December 2018

''Welcome to divine qualities like truth, nonviolence, peace, Wend to earn knowledge, sympathy, co-operation, never miss. Wenches are your sisters respect them and love them, Wholly you perform your work always with good aim.'' - Powerful verses with a profound love for wisdom!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Rohan ******* xlovely write again dear sir.. good morning.. 15 Oct 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x........amazing poem....I agree life is too short, and seems as if the older we become...the faster life goes, or maybe this is only my perception ★ 15 Oct 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Catherine Flaherty xI like the W pattern it makes the poem interesting 15 Oct 2015 by Catherine Flaherty | Reply picture of eleanor prince xI like the essence of your poem - to live life authentically in a worthwhile and honourable manner - good work! 19 Oct 2015 by eleanor prince | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 October 2015

Righteous deeds are what the Creartor wants from us. Thanks for sharing.

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Sanjukta Nag 14 October 2015

Waves of W-words. Wisdom is working widely. Wonderful.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 October 2015

Timely advice to a lost soul like me! Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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