Welcoming Dawn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Welcoming Dawn

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For welcoming dawn time is ready,
Our city is ready, road is ready,
To preach us, our daddy is ready,
A readiness whispers to watch beauty
The city awakens getting invitation,
Willingness of meditation grows,
To greet dawn and the vehicles
Trees have opened their leaves
Facing towards the city highway,
Street stars twisting their heads
From the iron towers towards road
They are contentiously pouring light,
Soon after the dawn will dance
And sun will rise giving a smile,
All street stars will disappear
Mysteriously they will hide,
Now they are cheering up,
To the mini-bus and autos and tractor,
And to a truck and to a bicycle rider,
And to car and all the buildings beside,
To all trees and to the silvery sky,
A devotional dawn's journey is welcomed!

God's tenderness is felt well,
Revival of beauty is painted
By silver colour and fresh greenness
In the middle lawn of highway,
Grass is gently dancing and singing,
Word is given and accepted to obey,
The first oblation of nature this is,
God will preach us with his wisdom
As he does for us everyday at dawn,
A pure purity is poured and powered,
Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky,
Silvery stars are leading giving smile
With the glimpse of dazzling motion,
For welcoming dawn first at sight
A grand procession is going on.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,07 April 2019. All rights reserved.

Welcoming Dawn
Sunday, April 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,imagination,nature,philosophical ,road
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover Photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,08 October 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 08 April 2019

The twilight hour between night and dawn is beautifully painted here! Everything is looking radiant bathed in silver glow! The street lamps blink....! Very soon the sun will rise, giving the surroundings a fresh glow. Revival of beauty is painted By silver colour and fresh greenness In the middle lawn of highway, Grass is gently dancing and singing, A lovely picture!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 April 2019

A well penned poem, sir Kumarmani that captures the wonderful dawn.....10+++++++++++++

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Kevin Patrick 07 April 2019

The magic of dawn, is like a painting by the Divine, your words bring that painting to life, a beautiful portrait Kumarmani, the dawn has been unlocked by your fine eyes. Brilliant Poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 April 2019

I wonder, why dawn always attracts one more than dusk. May be dawn is like a new-born child greeting life. Kumarmani Mahakul has a great ability to read a picture poetically.

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Heather W.B. 08 April 2019

The most powerful and calm silvery imagery of this poem nicely motivates us and we feel the beauty of this dazzling poem. You have perfectly captured the silvery moment of the nature and scenic beauty of a city street. Lovely street lamps too welcome dawn. This poem is very lovely really.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 December 2021

A readiness whispers to embrace beauty..... great

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Susan Williams 23 November 2019

As he does for us everyday at dawn, A pure purity is poured and powered, Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky, - - - - - - - - - - you have a way with words, my friend! Has to return and read this beauty again

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Susan Williams 09 September 2019

Yes! ! ! You put your reader right there! !

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 August 2019

'God will preach us with his wisdom As he does for us everyday at dawn, A pure purity is poured and powered, Powdered silver is sprinkled over sky, '.. are lovely lines. A pure poem on dawn that gives peace and happiness. Thanks.

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Barium Muserounica 23 April 2019

Science my childhood days dawn has become my FAVORITE AND THIS HAS GREATLY MOTIVATED MIND. You have penned a beautiful poem silvery imagery you have captured has true worth. This pleases and motivates mind. We feel God's tenderness very well.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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