success is the success of beliefs and thoughts,
success is the battle which have been saught.
success is not about getting fame and name,
but reaching the hieghts being the same.
success doesn't mean to get money,
but to remain as sweet as sugar and honey.
success comes if you chase it harder,
and an honest try is its starter.
success is not the thing to be waited,
but a depiction to be stated.
success is the dream which comes true,
when napping goes away from you.
success is not a game of letters,
but a truth which really matters.
success is the fruit of one's life,
which takes a lot of patience to hive.
success doesn't come by being ahead from all,
but to respect the things, from big to small.
this is the poem for success to preach,
the real value of life which it uses to teach.
What a lovely piece of writing and philosophy more people need to think like this before the worldis a kinder place. have you read the English poet John Clare and the American Robert frost? I think you will enjoy them both. Thankyou for your poem
Tanya, have you ever considered that success might just be the creation of a state of consciousness within which the true self, Soul, is in acceptance with all of life and is thus truly happy?
Oh! wonderful thought! bright defination of sucess. wish you all success.
this poem is a guidance to never give up it is the angel above all heaven to keep faith and hard work is everything when come to success
Tried much to illustrate success with rhyme. Nice your project to demonstrate the subject. I request you to read my poem about success...I AM SUCCESSFUL MAN
I must congratulate you for your profound understanding of what true success is. That at your age! I feel happy and proud to read your poem. Your lines rhyme and flow well. You are gifted, keep writing, Tanya.
success doesn't mean to get money, but to remain as sweet as sugar and honey. read this again and t feel good still
Beautiful poem Tanya. Success is what we feel good at heart. I loved reading each lines...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice poem Tanya. The rhyming is unusual in places, and there are a few spelling errors, but the sense of the poem isn't affected - I get the message.