~what Your Doin To Me (B) Poem by Dislocated Heart

~what Your Doin To Me (B)

Rating: 2.3


My head, is literally spinning..
my heart is pounding..
so loud im fainting..

i dont wanna live this way,
each day i die a little bit more.

just the thought of you..
turns me ice cold.

i changed my ways,
i did whatever was needed to make you happy.

why arent you satisfied?
havent i given my all?

i called in the middle of the night,
just to tell you i love you.

i bring you flowers every now and then.
i write you poems just to see a smile on your face.

where has your love gone?
i miss you..
now i just think its too late.

thoughts of you.. fill my mind..
doesnt matter what i do..
its only you in my head..

i tried to forget.. just erase you..
and pretend it never happened.
but day by day, i think of you more..

the feeling of this thought..
is eatin me up alive..
tearin my heart out..
from the inside.

this is what you are doing to me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

Perfect poem! ! ! I can relate to this in a big way. Giving you a 10. Thank you for sharing, Linda

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2008

An intense feeling of lost love.........time heals all wounds! ! ! crafted finely.

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Fahim Sayed 15 July 2008

Feelings penned nicely......things change with time..we got to be patient. Fahim

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