Wheel Meet Again Poem by Brian Mayo

Wheel Meet Again

Rating: 5.0


In a barren,
rocky field
a forgotten bicycle lay
rusting,
dreaming of hot winds
and carnival screams from
a long-ago
summer night.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: bicycle,childhood ,dreams,loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 22 October 2015

I enjoyed this wistful pithy poem about childhood and the ubiquitous, quintessential bike. You've captured allot in so few words. I like the way you write!

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2016

thanks. i DID send it. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

To MyPoemList.? .........

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Brian Mayo 16 May 2016

My poem list? Do you need to ask permission for that? I don't know all the rules... Go ahead.

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Bri Edwards 16 May 2016

WHO will meet again? ?

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Paul Brookes 24 October 2015

Very poignant short and clever poem a colourful evocation of childhood Loved it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Dreaming of hot winds is very amazing in this composition shared here. Wise composition....10

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Brian Mayo

Brian Mayo

Grand Rapids Michigan
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