When Brotherhood Speaks Poem by Abhay Vignesh Liginlal

When Brotherhood Speaks

Rating: 4.8


Call frailty a detached bud
And call the flower a frame of grace
Call the leaf a medium
And call the wind a messenger,

Let the readers of all those lines to come
Know of your birth in the land of glory
As brother to a poet and father to a daydream
As friend to a thinker and son to another dream

And then let them those soldiers of peace
Live in that promised land of art
Where I will become a poet
And you will become my brother.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Kult 27 June 2011

i really like this poem. you have a really unique way of writing.

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Excellent, full of grace, rhythme, rhyme, heart, a true poet has written, i have booked marked/10 please would you look and pick one of my poems. a brother poet, G

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 24 June 2011

The poem is resplendent with its thought and presentation. In the presence of so many qualities, the poem can be bracketed with great poems.The poet is a brother of every human being no doubt.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 23 June 2011

I LIKE THE IDEA OF EACH PORTION PLAYING A PART MAKING IT A WHOLE I LIKE THE LINE SAYING THAT THE WIND IS A MESSENGER. ALL IN ALL, VERY NICE READ. WRITE MORE.

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Maria Rose Dominic 23 June 2011

Nice use of imagery, , clear content true to its title..Really good work.

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