When Clouds Collide Poem by Rini Shibu

When Clouds Collide

Rating: 5.0


Flying in the sky like a dove
They are the floating clouds
When love ignites
In passion they collide
Rumbling sound vibrates
Deep inside heat generates 
The lightening strikes the heart
And the spark of fire lights thier love
Till it rains to cool the mind.

Wednesday, January 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,love,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 10 January 2018

This is a very delightful and enjoyable poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 01 July 2018

Desire on fire needs to cool otherwise we look like fools. Great write.++10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 January 2018

I had a love at the first sight for this title, felt like stealing this title one day from you to write a series of poems on it. A lovely rain of freshness over the reader. Thanks Rini for such a poem and the Title. 10+++++ Subhas

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Rini Shibu 20 January 2018

Hey no stealing.. Lol thanks for your compliments

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Kishore Kumar Das 16 January 2018

Love spurs the clouds to collide with each other resulting in rain, cooling the earth.......it is only a poetess like you who can imagine and compose such awesome lines......

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Rini Shibu 16 January 2018

Thank you so much Kishore for your compliments

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Akhtar Jawad 11 January 2018

Karachi is situated on the shore of Arabian Sea, there are neither forests nor mountains, when clouds from bay of Bengal collide with the clouds of Arabian Sea, it rains and we see tales of the Arabian nights. The poem is about the collision of two passions that ignite fire of love and is a lovely poem.

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Rini Shibu 11 January 2018

Thanks Akhtarji for your review

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2018

Clouds fly in sky and collide amazingly there. Interestingly the spark of fire lights their love. You have drawn a nice lovable imagery in this poem...10

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Rini Shibu 11 January 2018

Thanks Kumar for your comment..

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