Whirlpool Poem by Rini Shibu

Whirlpool

Rating: 5.0


Trapped in the whirlpool of words
your emotions have been stirred
Pulling you to the deeper floor
To explore the gems at the seabed
And you are caught by the tentacles
then you are hemmed in poets mind

Tuesday, May 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poet,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 08 May 2018

Very nice. Clever use of word power to make a nice poem. Enjoyed.

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Lamar Cole 08 May 2018

This is a very nice poem about whirlpool of words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 May 2018

Beautifully penned on poet and poetry using the word...'whirpool'. Lovely one.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 May 2018

your beautiful words and smile will take away many hearts today..and...you are the kindest to me.... now so many poets tell me...let them not envy... SIR/Ma'am ye and me- - I am a poet with and to all friendly...thanks ur really kind and all on PH are friends equal friends of mine...as I know none personally...all poets of PH are equal to and for me thanks ye who read and comment so lavishly

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Akhtar Jawad 08 May 2018

Words are like tentacles, once caught it becomes difficult for us to get ourselves free.

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Castellenas John 28 May 2019

I loved your work today. You make the words come alive to the reader.

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Bipasha D 23 May 2018

I am caught in the whirlpool of your words. Lovely

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Kostas Lagos 09 May 2018

You have tamed the words, so they dance in the rhythm you order.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 May 2018

Rini, you have got wonderful power of creativity! Appreciated the content! Thanks for sharing...10

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Robert Murray Smith 08 May 2018

Rini, beautifully crafted words catch us out.+++10 Robert

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