Trapped in the whirlpool of words
your emotions have been stirred
Pulling you to the deeper floor
To explore the gems at the seabed
And you are caught by the tentacles
then you are hemmed in poets mind
Beautifully penned on poet and poetry using the word...'whirpool'. Lovely one.
your beautiful words and smile will take away many hearts today..and...you are the kindest to me.... now so many poets tell me...let them not envy... SIR/Ma'am ye and me- - I am a poet with and to all friendly...thanks ur really kind and all on PH are friends equal friends of mine...as I know none personally...all poets of PH are equal to and for me thanks ye who read and comment so lavishly
Words are like tentacles, once caught it becomes difficult for us to get ourselves free.
I loved your work today. You make the words come alive to the reader.
Rini, you have got wonderful power of creativity! Appreciated the content! Thanks for sharing...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice. Clever use of word power to make a nice poem. Enjoyed.