Life Poem


When I Let You In - Poem by Life Poem

When I Let You In,
I Loved You,
More Than The The Sun Loves The Moon.

When I Stayed With You,
I Gave To You,
My Hands For Comfort and Heart for Help.

When I Kissed You,
I Close My Eyes,
And Let My Foot Pop Up Like A Little Girl.

When I Protected You,
I Meant What I Said,
And Smiled When I Got Into the Mess.

When I Swayed With You,
My Eyes Stayed On You,
And counted the twinkle in your eyes.

When I was part' From You,
My Mind was on you,
and the memories we had.

When I Loved You,
I Let You In,
and you came.

When I Loved You More,
You stole from me,
And Left.

When I Watched You Leave,
I Broke,
The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You.


Comments about When I Let You In by Life Poem

  • (12/28/2011 7:44:00 PM)


    i let you in you lied and betyrad me.....................so i i did the same......awesome poem, my favorite part is when you wrote.....when i let you in, i loved you.more than the sun loves the moon, reallllyyyy goood toching

    love, annie
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  • (11/8/2009 5:51:00 PM)


    this is a good poem, but also a very good poem to read is 'Neil is awsome' (Report) Reply

  • (9/22/2009 11:46:00 PM)


    i really like this poem because i fully understand and feel it. its beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (8/12/2009 12:21:00 PM)


    I'm glad yall' realize this.
    I don't even think the worst scums know how bad they were to someone who thought they were good.
    That's why it's always really good to hear the worst.
    Not to mention a thanks for you guys saying I had nice literature
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  • Malini Kadir (8/9/2009 7:36:00 PM)


    When I Watched You Leave,
    I Broke,
    The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You.
    .......................the poetry lines still haunting my thoughts....
    a poetry that catches the emotional you........Great job!
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  • Aron Lelei (8/1/2009 5:47:00 AM)


    Poetry is about letting in. It is a poetry that deserves a credit and a crown.
    It is a 10.
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (7/26/2009 1:52:00 PM)


    a vivid picture.....lovely and touchy!
    10+
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  • (6/22/2009 3:31:00 PM)


    Thanks, it got quite some people thinking, which I am glad.' (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2009 10:33:00 AM)


    Emotional and thought provoking. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2009 7:29:00 PM)


    Thanks both of you for paying attention to this poem.
    It does suck, that they do hurt.
    But that's where the beauty of poems come in.
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  • (6/17/2009 3:34:00 PM)


    : (....relationships hurt...that really sucks......the ones that you love most always seem to hurt you more.
    10+
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  • (6/15/2009 11:14:00 AM)


    Thanks guys, I went for this sort of bizarre rhythm and all.
    But emotional as well.
    Thanks!
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  • (6/13/2009 6:22:00 PM)


    Wow I'm touched by your comments.
    I won't patch things up btw, he's probably harassing some other poor girl now.
    And I really do mean what i right, that's the beauty!
    Yup, he stole some stuff from me.
    Thanks!
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  • (6/13/2009 3:28:00 PM)


    Awww, poor thing
    Well written 10+
    poem well expressed
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  • (6/13/2009 1:36:00 PM)


    Very heart felt and tru....if this happn to u guys patch things up....truly beautiful.

    DIMPLZ
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2009 12:35:00 PM)


    When I Watched You Leave,
    I Broke,
    The Crumbling Dust Still Haunting You.... it is so painful dear. very good write
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 13, 2009


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