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In My Pocket - Poem by Life Poem

In my pocket I had placed your heart
making sure it didn't fall.

Oh! A fish jumped out of the earth for me,
a pig fly cross' the sky to thee'
the mountains mentioned their hellos,
the storm became quiet and stopped to bellow.

All as I skipped by with your heart in my pocket,
and loved you still.


Comments about In My Pocket by Life Poem

  • (8/12/2009 12:11:00 PM)


    Yay!
    I captured reader's hearts!
    I think we can all relate to feeling safe when someone loves you.
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  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (7/26/2009 12:57:00 AM)


    What an amazingly lovely story! (Report) Reply

  • (7/11/2009 10:53:00 PM)


    A lovely piece!
    10!
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  • (6/22/2009 3:28:00 PM)


    Thanks so much.
    I like to see good imagery in poems as well, so it is a gold comment.
    Beautifully, yes it is.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/19/2009 5:40:00 AM)


    Beautiful imagery and metaphors.So, it's still in your pocket? (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2009 9:28:00 PM)


    I hope he has my heart too, lol.
    Thanks for commenting, I tried something new here too
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  • (6/15/2009 8:16:00 PM)


    awww, I hope
    your heart stays save
    in this pocket...
    10s
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009



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