In My Pocket Poem by Life Poem

In My Pocket

Rating: 3.7


In my pocket I had placed your heart
making sure it didn't fall.

Oh! A fish jumped out of the earth for me,
a pig fly cross' the sky to thee'
the mountains mentioned their hellos,
the storm became quiet and stopped to bellow.

All as I skipped by with your heart in my pocket,
and loved you still.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 June 2009

Beautiful imagery and metaphors.So, it's still in your pocket?

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Life Poem 15 June 2009

I hope he has my heart too, lol. Thanks for commenting, I tried something new here too

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Eyan Desir 15 June 2009

awww, I hope your heart stays save in this pocket... 10s

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sffdd 17 November 2019

this stinks cat can do better

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Life Poem 12 August 2009

Yay! I captured reader's hearts! I think we can all relate to feeling safe when someone loves you.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 July 2009

What an amazingly lovely story!

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Obed Souza 11 July 2009

A lovely piece! 10!

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Life Poem 22 June 2009

Thanks so much. I like to see good imagery in poems as well, so it is a gold comment. Beautifully, yes it is.

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