When love is gone,
Beauty slowly disappears,
Feelings drowned in a sea of tears
Departure becomes a new song...
Captivated I was by your beauty,
Perplexed by your stamina and wonder,
But your betrayal caused me fury,
Now, of your distorted image, I ponder..
With tenderness and emotion,
Your heart I furnished,
And a great passion I tried to preserve,
But for someone's else crime,
I was unfairly punished,
Leaving me with the bitter taste
Of a poem without a rhyme...
Guess, it is just fate,
So much love, so much devotion,
I stumbled, but thank the Lord,
I survived..! ! !
Now feeling good I remained,
Knowing that I never gave up,
Without a fight!
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whoa! i loved it this poem is so captivating and i love the use of words because they show tons of emotion good job :)
your heart lies open for the world to read here dear Romeo. Standing tall you will survive. Someday love will appear
You surely poured and put into words your emotions because I can see a POEM here.
what a wonderful poem i really like your work i like the use of words and devoting your love for someone no matter the pains or whatever happened till the overwhelming win keep it up Romeo you have my rate 10+++
I've been through this... i didn't like the feel, but i like your poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love it! Yes we survive, and can only thank the lord for it. Great rhythm and rhyme through Smiling at you Tai