After spreading her gold for the day
In so many directions and ways
The Sun is ready to depart
And rest to give chance to night
When it finally sets above the horizon
Its golden beams create magical color tones
That bring warmth to creation
Inspiring us to look forward to
A beautiful tomorrow.
Copyright 2020, Rose Mare Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Inspiring us to look forward to A beautiful tomorrow........beautifully crafted the star departs the sun comes the sun departs the moon comes the dark night departs the enlightened day comes the present departs the future comes oh; never come the past but every present greets the every present with the would be FORM like the would be SPOUSE......
The Sun is ready to depart/And rest to give chance to night/When it finally sets above the horizon.......Candid poetic expression! A very commendable piece of poetry! Top score.
I cite the most important two lines (to my opinion) from your delightful poem: Its golden beams create magical color tones That bring warmth to creation...........this occurs during an unrained day, a dry day oft brings golden beams with magical color tones, a wonderful tomorrow. While reading this fascinating poem, I can feel the warmth coming up, dear Mrs. Juan Austin. A 10++++for this golden gem and to MyPoemsList.
A beautiful tomorrow........magnificent......thank u, dear poetess....anjandev roy.
This poem is very much so worth revisiting! A lovely piece, full of solar beauty! I have long loved astronomy and the planets, so this poem resonates with me!
A grand and profound poem! Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the Sun!
Golden beams of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, every sunset is hope for tomorrow to dawn
Amazing masterpiece of work by a great poet always deserves 10++ and on to the Fav List Well done and thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
After spreading her gold for the day In so many directions and ways Rose Marie Juan Austin is ready to depart And rest to give chance to night When she is finally sets on the top list of poets her golden beams create magical means of love and peace Inspiring us to look forward to the beauty of life .