When The Brightest And Biggest Star Departs Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

When The Brightest And Biggest Star Departs

Rating: 4.6


After spreading her gold for the day
In so many directions and ways
The Sun is ready to depart
And rest to give chance to night
When it finally sets above the horizon
Its golden beams create magical color tones
That bring warmth to creation
Inspiring us to look forward to
A beautiful tomorrow.


Copyright 2020, Rose Mare Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 28 July 2020

After spreading her gold for the day In so many directions and ways Rose Marie Juan Austin is ready to depart And rest to give chance to night When she is finally sets on the top list of poets her golden beams create magical means of love and peace Inspiring us to look forward to the beauty of life .

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 July 2020

Inspiring us to look forward to A beautiful tomorrow........beautifully crafted the star departs the sun comes the sun departs the moon comes the dark night departs the enlightened day comes the present departs the future comes oh; never come the past but every present greets the every present with the would be FORM like the would be SPOUSE......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2020

The Sun is ready to depart/And rest to give chance to night/When it finally sets above the horizon.......Candid poetic expression! A very commendable piece of poetry! Top score.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2020

I cite the most important two lines (to my opinion) from your delightful poem: Its golden beams create magical color tones That bring warmth to creation...........this occurs during an unrained day, a dry day oft brings golden beams with magical color tones, a wonderful tomorrow. While reading this fascinating poem, I can feel the warmth coming up, dear Mrs. Juan Austin. A 10++++for this golden gem and to MyPoemsList.

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Anjandev Roy 23 July 2020

A beautiful tomorrow........magnificent......thank u, dear poetess....anjandev roy.

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Timber Koleden 16 October 2025

This poem is very much so worth revisiting! A lovely piece, full of solar beauty! I have long loved astronomy and the planets, so this poem resonates with me!

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Timber Koleden 05 August 2025

A grand and profound poem! Thank you for this beautiful tribute to the Sun!

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

Golden beams of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Yes, every sunset is hope for tomorrow to dawn

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Soran M. H 28 July 2020

Amazing masterpiece of work by a great poet always deserves 10++ and on to the Fav List Well done and thanks for sharing

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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