When My Pen Bleeds Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

When My Pen Bleeds

Rating: 4.6


When my pen bleeds
I can soar to high heavens
The four chambers of my heart flutter
The four corners of my mind tingle.

When my pen bleeds
I can swim the deepest sea
And see the beauty and wonders
Of the rock bottom sea.

When my pen bleeds
I can reach the vastness
Of the sky and its galaxies
And the moon and stars shine for me.

When my pen bleeds
I can tour the whole universe
Without passing through borders
A world without color
A world without race.

I will let my pen
Continue to bleed
Bleed...
Bleed...
Bleed...
Unceasingly.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, June 7, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 07 June 2020

Well crafted poem RM!

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2020

To reach the vastness with the muse of the pen! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 07 June 2020

Beautiful poem. Great writers make their pens bleed along with their imagination. Great job

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Sandra Feldman 08 June 2020

Marvelous poem! Full of passion and poetic truth. Yes, exceptional poets write with all their heart, with all their feelings, with all their blood. Poetry holds a hypnotic and unstoppable attraction, that can't be held back, that must be expressed, naturally never forced like the love we feel like the air we breath.

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Valsa George 09 June 2020

This is the true delight of a poet.... nay a point at which he/ she feels that he/ she is at the top of the world in a state of self abandon and euphoria.....! Poetry has this wonderful gift of transporting us to a state when we feel one with the rest of the humanity where all man made barriers of caste and creed disintegrate and a wholistic love empowers us and lifts us to high heavens. A wonderful write!

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An exquisite poem, sublime poetry, on the wings and fins of imagination. Marvellous

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Shaun Cronick 02 December 2020

Such a great and apt title and beautiful poem for any poetess or poet to be held captivated by during and after reading. Written by a great poetess who is destined to remain at the height of her engaging and most heartfelt poetry powers. Five deserving shining stars. Thank you Rose Marie for sharing your poetry gift and remain poetry blessed. Take care.

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Shaun Cronick 06 August 2020

A poem of truth and so heartfelt. A great world class poetess shares her imagination and lovingly takes the reader on a vivid and most poetic journey. 10++ and wish it was much more. Thank you Rose Marie and stay poetry blessed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 June 2020

2) Embodying all: heart and mind, earth and sky, the universe, the galaxy, all moving, flashing, WOW! All very impressive and amazing things you can associate with, I'm completely silent, silent in wonder for the great poetess, and that is poetry in reality, the pen bleeds, incessantly... this response with great respect and awe for the passionate poetess, I leave here, I can go on endlessly, is my inspired, passionate great poetess with sooo much zest!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 June 2020

Unceasingly..... the last word of the five flaming stanzas passionate, and the most beautiful, unceasingly…. this word echoes in me day and night, and then I realize very well what the great poetess means, abnormally much, most complete, including, the embodiment of all these:

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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